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Redunculous
Novel: The Deeper Footprints
Genre: Mainstream Fiction
17,721 words so far  

About Redunculous

Location: Escondido, California

Home Region:
USA :: California :: North San Diego County

Age:35

Favorite novels: Intensity by Dean Koonts, Insomnia by Stephen King, Phantom by Susan Kay, Tietam Brown by Mick Foley

Favorite writers: Koontz and King, and Mick Foley

Favorite music: Dead freakin' silence when I write

Non-noveling interests: Looking at banged up cars, whippin' the young-uns into shape, and frosty beverages.

Joined: October 2, 2008

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'08

NaNoWriMo posts: 14

NaNoWriMo buddies: 11

 

Brief Author Bio:

Last year was my first attempt at NaNoWriMo. I crawled across the finish line with about two hours to spare on the 30th, and haven't touched the darn thing since. So... what have I learned from last year? First, you can write 50,000 without an outline, sketch, character notes, or even a clue about how you are going to get from that awesome starting point to that elusive ending. Second, a lack of preparation leads to me taking the story into directions that, while interesting, leave me searching for a way to tie it back into my main plot. Third, back up your novel. I misplaced a flash drive for a few days, which set me behind schedule for the rest of the month. I had to pound out about 7,500 words on the last day to win. Am I proud of my mistakes? Maybe. Will I do them again? Probably. Will I win in '09? Hell yeah!

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Synopsis: The Deeper Footprints

On a dare, Terra sent a letter to the most famous killer in the California prison system. When he wrote back, her world changed. Now with every word she is coming to understand what drives a killer, and in the process she is forced to examine her own moral code, and the sin she has yet to pay for. Is her dark pen pal leading her to ruin, or is there a saving grace for us all?

Excerpt: The Deeper Footprints

Chapter Three

It smelled of vanilla. Was it on purpose he wondered. Was this person writing to him, this female, scenting her letter to him with vanilla? He raised the plain white security envelope to his nose and inhaled deeply. The vanilla was faint but unmistakable.
Walter pictured a country home somewhere in the hills east of Los Angeles. The lawn was well manicured. Green beyond reality, and lush. A cobblestone path stretched from the front porch off into the distance beyond where he cared to imagine. The home was rustic, but well maintained. A shake shingle roof of brown and grey covered the home and it’s wood plank sides. A large protruding window in the front of the home. What did they call them, he thought. Bay windows. Yes, a bay window trimmed in white with flowing curtains of Queen Anne’s Lace just inside the spotless glass panes.
His imagination began a curvy lazy panning towards that bay window. Over the lawn, crossing the path not once but two times, hovering just over a flower bed and just outside the window. The sun cast a brilliant reflection across the glass surface blocking any view inside.
Eventually the glare of the sun subsided and Walter was looking at himself in the glass. He was there on the lawn. The grass made noise beneath his bare feet. He couldn’t feel the emerald blades, but he could hear their gentle crunch as he shifted his positioning. Walter crouched down to get a better look into the glass. It was all him. His hair, shaggy and dark, framing his bearded face. Each facial feature, out of proportion, and yet at home on him. The thick brow. The deep set gray eyes. The tiny scar below his left eye. It was all him..

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