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Mandables
Novel: Suburban Urgency
Genre: Romance
17,578 words so far  

About Mandables

Location: Chicago Suburbs

Home Region:
United States :: Illinois :: Chicago

Age:17

Website: http://www.fictionpress.com/u/602618/

Favorite novels: The Great Gatsby, The Host, Going After Cacciato, Betwixt, The Warrior Heir, Twilight, Blue Bloods, Private, Pants on Fire, The Upper Class, Peeps, The Truth About Forever, Harry Potter book 7, A Great & Terrible Beauty

Favorite writers: LIbba Bray, JK Rowling, Stephenie Meyer, Scott Westerfeld, Cecily von Ziegesar, Hobson Brown, Sara Dessen, Elizabeth Scott

Favorite music: Muse, Katy Perry, Incubus, Queens of the Stone Age, Rise Against, Big D & the Kids Table, MGMT, Coldplay, The Academy Is..., The Strokes

Non-noveling interests: Vogue Magazine, My Look-Book, Music

Joined: October 6, 2008

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:

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Brief Author Bio:

My name's Amanda. I'm a seventeen year old aspiring writer in my last year of high school (ick!). I write a lot of stories on Fictionpress. This is my first try at NaNoWriMo but I'm very excited about it. I guess I'll have to skip out on all my homework in the month of November...at least I have an excuse this time!

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Synopsis: Suburban Urgency

Ainsley Hunter McDaniels is dissatisfied with her life. Of course she'd never reverse her decision to get back what she's sacrificed. With no parents or any other family in the picture she was forced to take custody of her younger brothers after her grandmother's death. Now she should be at Cornell, majoring in Child Psychology, but instead she's stuck in a small town taking care of a pair of seven year olds and working at the local bookstore. Just across the street is where she met him, buying a tub of Ben & Jerry's. The first night she spent with Logan Connors, thought he was clinically insane. She cringed at his outright reckless behavior. Ainsley thought her life would be much simpler without his involvement. And it could have been, if he hadn't started showing everywhere she went and even winning over the two people she cares about most in the world.

Protagonist: Ainsley Hunter McDaniels
Love-interest: Logan Connors

Excerpt: Suburban Urgency

Who the hell—and that’s when I turned. The wheels on the carts are pretty squeaky and from down the aisle, I could hear some shrieking. I jumped back just in time for it to come barreling by me. It happened so fast—there was the boy, very attractive, propelling it forward and then I caught sight of the fact that there were at least thirty pints of my B & J's in that one cart.

But that was secondary, because he almost took off my legs. I hopped halfway inside of the freezer and let loose a high pitched noise. Whether it was a scream or a yelp, I just don’t know, but I did know I was getting one of the pints from that boy.

He stopped abruptly ten feet away from me and hopped down from the cart. It was too soon because the cart swayed and crashed, falling on its side. I just watched as the boy stared at the pints rolling away from him. He didn’t even scramble to gather them; he—he actually screamed.

Under a different setting I would have called it a battle cry, but we were in a grocery store for crying out loud. Which is exactly what he did—cry out loud. I was staring incredulously at them; another friend had just rushed forward and slapped him on the back, laughing. I stood there gaping long enough for one of the tubs to roll toward me.

I picked it up from the floor, turned it over in both hands and read the flavor. Nice. Half Baked. I turned away from those guys—either drunk or complete lout of their minds—and started to throw it in with the rest of my groceries.

I turned back; just to glance to check that I didn’t hallucinate the whole thing. The guy, the one who rode the cart, said something to his friend and started jogging toward me. He wasn’t far away and I—though I watched his whole procession toward me—jumped when he spoke. “You’re really going to steal my Ben & Jerry’s?”

“You didn’t buy it yet.” I jerked the hand holding the ice cream away from him. He grinned. Nope, he was way too attractive for me to have prolonged exposure to, no matter how crazy he was. I’d probably hand over the ice cream without any argument if he kept smiling at me like that.

His eyes, a startling electric blue, were almost to light for his face. He had a deep tan and dark brown—no, it was black—hair and dimples in both cheeks. “But it was in my cart.”

“Well, it’s in mine now,” I said as I dropped it in. He chuckled and took a step toward my cart and in turn, me. “I’m not giving it back.”

He rocked back on his heels and abruptly leaned forward. Too bad I could already tell what he was planning on doing. I slid the cart backwards and forgot about myself. I froze and heat flooded my face as he delved way into my personal space.

He smiled wider—it seemed to be a game to him. But, I don’t give up quality dairy products for anyone. “Tricky girl.”

And then everything went black. Or, well, the overhead lighting in the store flickered and died.

"I'm Logan."

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