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SquiddySophi
Novel: Poor Devils
Genre: Other Genres
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About SquiddySophi

Location: Buckinghamshire, England

Home Region:
Europe :: England :: Elsewhere

Age:15

Favorite novels: The Magician's Guild, City of Bones, Focal Point, The Singing, Mercy

Favorite writers: Cassandra Clare, Azi, Alison Croggan, Trudi Caravan

Favorite music: Techno, dance, rock

Non-noveling interests: Manga, anime, drawing

Joined: October 18, 2008

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'08

NaNoWriMo posts: 117

NaNoWriMo buddies: 11

 

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Synopsis: Poor Devils

It's just the wrong kind of relationship...

She's just a child.

All she cares about is god and a man who abandoned her...

She's just a child.

She can barely even speak her mind...

All you can do is arm her and care for her, and keep her away from the outside world. Because once she gets out, she'll never come back.

Or worse. One of your enemies will kill her.

Unacceptable.

Excerpt: Poor Devils

Somehow, they found each other further down the road.

She stared at him, arms crossed underneath her chest, her eyes dark and accusing, a shadowy depth to them that hadn’t been there before.

He stared back coolly, not a touch of shame in his eyes at what he’d done. No pity or sorrow.

They were both injured.

She was worse off than he was.

But still, when she walked up to him, slower and slower, practically limping, he stood still. When she drew her hand back and slapped him across the face, he let her. Then he quickly caught her wrist again on its way back to her side.

He smiled for a split second moment, and let it go.

She took it back, the message clear, and stood straighter; a pride to her that she’d never had locked in that room.

“That was pathetic,” he said, choosing to bypass everything that had happened. “I need to teach you how to punch a man properly.”

Her eyes looked up at him, hooded and opaque. Then they cleared, and she brought back the childlike part of her that had made him feel shame for just a second. She smiled up at him, the trust plain in her face, and said, clearly, “Deal.”

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