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Novel: Sympathy for the Devil
Genre: Mystery & Suspense
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About leamire

Location: Finland

Home Region:
Europe :: Finland

Age:19

Favorite novels: The Secret History, The Book Thief, Where Rainbows End, Twilight

Joined: October 26, 2008

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'08

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Synopsis: Sympathy for the Devil

A detective goes around wearing a trench coat and fedora and exorcising demons from people. People claim that this does not make him a detective, it just makes him a plain exorcist, but he insists on being called a detective for unknown reasons. After a particularly traumatizing/gruesome exorcism/case, he unexpectedly learns that he himself is a demon inhabiting the body of a human; a memory which he had repressed out of guilt. After dedicating his life to getting rid of demons, will he continue in the body of the human, or will he follow his job and essentially commit suicide by exorcising himself?

Excerpt: Sympathy for the Devil

[first draft]

“So, you have twenty bucks?” She asked this very sternly, not in a way you could expect a beggar to do: there was no kindness, no pleading, no helplessness.
“No.” His reply was just as stoic, he didn’t even look at her when he gathered his things from the street and put them into his bag, willing to leave this very instance. His answer was not enough for the girl, though.
“Ten?”
“No.”
“Okay, then. Give me five.”
“Nope.” The last thing, his hat, was lying right next to girl’s legs. He wondered whether or not the girl would be bold enough to take it as hostage.
“You don’t have five dollars?” she snorted mockingly. “What kind of a man are you?”
“No, I have five dollars, but I’m not gonna give them to you,” he answered, both tired and annoyed. Couldn’t the girl just thank him and let him be?
“What a fine gentleman you are,” she said smiling cruelly, perfectly unamused. “‘Kay, give me a dollar. Just one dollar, baby.” She leaned closer to him. “That you can at least afford to give to such a pathetic creature as I am.”
“No,” he said, grabbed his hat swiftly from the ground, put it on and turned his back to her, finally leaving.
“Why the hell not?” she called angrily after him.
Ash was astonished by the girl’s aggressiveness and the bitter tone of her voice: she was so tiny, so fragile in her oversized coat and fisherman’s boots – someone delicate, someone who would not know how to demand anything with a curse. He chuckled lightly, caught up by his surprise, as he turned back to her.
What an annoying creature.
“How can I know where you’re gonna spend it?”
Now it was the girl’s turn to look surprised: her furry brows went up near to her hairline in a questioning manner, her thin lips turned into a grimace.
“What?” she demanded sarcastically. “You wanna receipt?”
"Well," he said slowly. "It wouldn't hurt."

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