Genre: Fantasy
About jeanie.gordonLocation: California Home Region: Age:19 Website: hscheeler.daportfolio.com Favorite novels: The Time Traveler's Wife, The Dogs of Babel, The Thief of Always, Harry Potter, The Lovely Bones, The Secret Life of Bees, The Da Vinci Code Favorite writers: J. K. Rowling, Audrey Niffenegger, Carolyn Parkhurst Favorite music: The Beatles, Regina Spektor, oldies music in general Non-noveling interests: Painting, Drawing, Sleeping, Making Lists |
Joined: July 16, 2009 This Year: Official Participant NaNoWriMo History: NaNoWriMo posts: 38 NaNoWriMo buddies: 11
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Brief Author Bio: I am a sophomore in college this year and, while I am majoring in Cultural Anthropology with a minor in Art, I have wanted to be an author all of my life. My first book was called My Pet Boa and it was about just that: having a pet boa. I always planned it to be in a series of "My Pet ______" books including, but not limited to my pet giraffe, tiger, swan, elephant, fox, and lion. I have since gone through several stages in my writing career, some of which I don't care to remember, and I have happily settled at a somewhat historical fiction genre. I hope that this November I can, for the first time in my life, complete a novel. Wish me luck! |
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Synopsis: The Alta Fallen
The Alta are the eyes and ears of their country. They live high above the towns and kingdoms in their solitary sky boats and record everything they see about the land. They study the geography, terrain, and peopling of their country as well as watch the weather to warn the people below of the various storms and droughts that come through. They are astronomers and guards alike. They study the stars all the while patrolling the country to ensure it is safe from neighboring armies. All of this they send back to their kingdom to keep them constantly aware of everything they could not see for themselves.
When a young Alta discovers a rival country's plan to invade her own, she prepares to send a warning down to the kingdom so that they may prepare for battle. However, before she is able to send said message, a storm hits and her boat is thrown far off course and she is forced to make a crash landing. As she emerges from the wreckage of her boat, she finds herself, not in her own country and not in any neighboring countries that she recognizes, but in a strange world she could never have even imagined.
The young Alta has been sent to present day America. Now she must find a way to get back home and warn her people of the coming attack before it's too late. A country without an Alta is a country without eyes or ears and so she has left hers defenseless.
Excerpt: The Alta Fallen
Suddenly, the air took on a cold bite completely aside from the chill she had experienced from witnessing the terrifying sight below. A crisp wind whipped across her face, starkly contrasting the gentle caresses of the day up until that point. Thick, dark clouds bloomed from nowhere and quickly consumed nearly all of the flawlessly blue sky around her. Turning to see whether she had just missed an obvious prelude to a storm, she watched as the clouds which had so quickly sprung into life seemed to emanate from the neighboring Alta’s ship.
As she considered this, a heavy wind, much stronger than the first, took hold of her boat and pulled her sharply off course. The balloon which held the ship afloat was being buffeted back and forth, pitching and lurching almost as though a giant child had hold of it and was swinging it like a rag doll.
Tately was thrown against the railings of the staircase which led to the lower rooms of the ship. She tried to stand and was defeated again, a voracious wind tearing at the ship with all of the power it could muster.
By the time she made it to the helm where she could steer the ship, they were already too deep within the killer storm to have any chance of navigating out. Additionally, Tately was well aware that this was no ordinary storm. She had heard of Altas with more power than usually allotted to the position, but she had never realized just how much power one of these Altas might have. Producing a storm of this ferocity was an incredible feat.
Lightning crackled across the skies around her, seeming to electrify the air that whipped past. The thick ropes holding the balloon to the ship strained as a constant barrage of gusts attempted to tear the two apart.
The ship lurched suddenly, its nose beginning to tilt forward as they quickly lost altitude. They were going to crash.
With an increased rush of adrenaline, Tately leaned hard on the wheel, steering the ship to what looked to be an empty field. It would be the safest place to crash.
Rain stung at her face, drenching her and making the boards beneath her slippery and hazardous. She had to maintain control of the wheel. Attempting to remain upright in the pitching storm, she guided the ship as accurately as she could to her quickly approaching crash spot and then threw herself between a railing and mast, hoping to prevent herself from being thrown against something on impact.
Finally, with a sickening crunch, the ship crashed to earth. The noise was gut wrenching, the splintering of the hull adding to the angry booms of thunder. One of the masts lay broken over where Tately was still successfully wedged. She could hear the pounding raindrops bombarding the canvas balloon which had deflated over her.
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