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Genre: Romance
About blueicegalLocation: uk Home Region: Age:17 Favorite novels: city of bones, twilight, ps i love you, pretty little liers, the pact, lucas, a walk to remember 13 reasons why!! great book, before i die, goodbye beautiful Favorite writers: cassandra clare, dorothy koomsoom, |
Joined: August 16, 2009 This Year: Official Participant NaNoWriMo History: NaNoWriMo posts: 0 NaNoWriMo buddies: 8
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Brief Author Bio: hey jus call me blue some of u might know me as blueicegal from the teen reads boards so hey!! lol you can chek out more of the story which actually started as a add on and is still being continued at the moment but i just loved it so much and got attached to the add on i just thought , i really need to make this a full on story, so feel free to be honest and let me know what you think ,and how could i forget no way could this story be possible if not for the great people who suppoted and helped make it happen, julia, djaq, mg,kyleigh and most of all random:) even when i felt i was loosing faith u kept on encouraging me, and when i felt the add on had been abandoned u always added on u have no idea how much that urged me on so thank you:) |
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Synopsis: Fanelia
The story is about a 16 year old girl named Aleena shes a MI'hen or so she thinks, shes streetwise tough and not the most mercifel person ull ever meet, her mother for some reason hates her, her family are almost strangers to her, but she has her fellow Mi'hens her best friends right? right?... itll take heartache, determination and betrayel to turn aleenas world upside down, to realise the rules shes followed, the things shes been brought up to believe, the friends that meant everything to her, was any of it real?, and would she rarther keep living the life that has been chosen for her or will she follow the path her destiney has chosen... and open her eyes to a world of a majestic history and past even she couldnt have imagined.
Excerpt: Fanelia
well i had written a excerpt before but i decided to replace it with some quotes from my novel to keeps things interesting, im not going to mention the names to just to keep you guessing except for the first one :)
Aleena- But she knew he was mine, how i cared for him, i left Carah all of them for her, i trusted her, and then she took the first person i felt for, is that really forgivable?
"when you think the person you care for has abandoned you, you make your self accept the unacceptable" he said with a shrug
"since when does the bigger person remember the smaller person, the bully remember the victim,?? to them we are just one in thousands, we are not significant"
"Yeh your the girl, who because of her loserness went on a journey of self discovery only to find what a looser she always had been and so returned to annoy us all to boredom" she said rather pleased with her little speech
"good story you got there, infact i wouldn't mind a copy"
"i saw what the others didn't, you waited, you waited for a long time, its ok, you can sleep now," i said reassuringly even though the tears kept coming, smoothing back her hair one last time, i held her close, and with that turned away
"where do we go now?" i asked nervously
"wherever fate takes us i guess" he replied seeming to calm
"so you believe in fate , destiny all that stuff" i asked
"have to, destiny tells me, ill be the savior of my people, fate wills me to carry on, without both, im lost, my life has no meaning"
"darn you, aleena, you used to be tough, you swore like no other, you kicked ass for a living, and now look at you, pathetic" i muttered feeling truly disgusted at myself
"is she ok?" asked Ruby puzzled
"ignore her , she seems to do that alot"
its the inner bitch aleena calm it, calm down women"
"crap shes doing it again" said Skye seeming annoyed
"stop talking to yourself, its disturbing" he snapped
"why" i asked it was all i said yet i knew he understood
"its strange i don't want to, but i feel drawn to you"
"we can't be together can't we"?
"i wish we could, i know its wrong i try not to, but i still wish for it.. "
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