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ComfyDenim
Novel: The Bounty of Grace
Genre: Fantasy
63,623 words so far  

About ComfyDenim

Location: Oklahoma

Age:36

Favorite novels: Too many to name but at the top of the list are: Princess Bride, Hunt for Red October, and the Phantom Tollbooth

Favorite writers: I tend to like authors who write great characters ...

Favorite music: My music tastes are eclectic. Passion to Hillsong to Jason Upton and Rick Pino, From Norah Jones to Skillet, Willie Nelson to Harry Connick, Jr. I like what I like.

Non-noveling interests: Music, Singing, dancing, Starbucks, Facebook quizzes, Girl Genius, CakeWrecks, Barnes and Noble,

Joined: October 5, 2009

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:

NaNoWriMo posts: 71

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Brief Author Bio:

I'm a 36 year old mom of 4.
Married for 12 years to a man who says I can do this or that... he just lets me be me.
Which includes getting my first tattoo in september! Writing books at all hours of the night and ignoring the laundry.

We have four kids - 2 girls & 2 boys.
When I'm not chasing them we're homeschooling or playing video games - or reading books. Our house is never quiet and I'm not sure we have inside voices at all.

We have 1 dog, 1 cat, 1 robo. dwarf hamster, and 3 beta fish.
I have turned down the invitation for owning a snake any anything that ends in "y" -- like kitty or puppy. The Professor has turned down the request for a parakeet. Darn it. I've always wanted a parakeet.

I've been writing since I was 12. Never really thinking that it would go anywhere, and so I never really pursued the path. Even though I never formally followed the path of an author, the Passion to write never left.

I guess if you get ink in your blood it stays there.

After living with my characters for nearly 5 years, mainly fearful to put them on paper because I didn't think it would go anywhere...my Professor encouraged me to write my novel.

Somewhere in the process I liked what I was writing. With much glee, I realized that, cliched as it might be, my fantasy novel might actually be worth finishing.

So I finished the first draft. Edited it and gave it to my readers. They are reading it and - not hating the cliches, much - when that's finished I'll start submitting it for publication.

Until then - I decided to join the NaNoWriMo craziness so I can write more cliches but mostly I want hear the delightful clacking of the keys on my keyboard.

Synopsis: The Bounty of Grace

Grace has run away from home after coming face to face with with her father's anger and cruelty. A magician himself, he sees only potential in the fact that one of his children has finally shown ability with magic where the other two had not.

Grace has successfully been hiding for nearly three years. Changing jobs and moving on from place to place. Right now she's working with a theater troupe as an assistant and the occasional extra. Grace has a good singing voice and an excellent ear for accents that the troupe has put to good use.

Until the fateful night, the bounty hunter has finally caught up with Grace. His job is to drag her back to her city of birth to whoever hired him -- he isn't exactly forthcoming in the identity of his employer. Grace decidedly does not want to go. In order to get the rest of his money, he has to drag her unwilling personage on the long journey home.

He didn't count on her attempting to escape. More than once.
Nor were River Pirates, Assassins and a rival bounty hunter trying to steal his catch part of his plans
And it seems, Grace's father has sent people to find Grace and kill Reed.

They'll make it back, by sheer force of Reed's will, but at what cost?

Excerpt: The Bounty of Grace

It was her eyes that convinced him that he'd found her. He'd wandered around the square earlier in the morning as the theater troupe was setting up their wagons to set the stage. Seeing nothing of interest at the time, he'd moved away to find food and make arrangements. Now he stood at the side as people started to fill the board benches pulled out of the nearest pub. The city didn't have a designated theater, and they were making due with the center square, with room enough for the wagons to sit and hang curtains between. The dark fabric served as a back drop and as a divider between the audience and the behind the scenes goings on of costume changes and lining up of the cast.
Reed leaned against one of the four trees that marked the four corners of the square. He was behind the stage watching the goings on. People milled about him and paid him no attention. Four Corners was a way point for many travelers. Two direct roads intersected in the city and the townsfolk were used to the all sorts of people and, things, passing through. Many of them had learned to judge strangers at an instant. Sometimes they were wrong, but mostly they were right. Many people judged Reed quickly as dangerous but not a careless threat as some would be.
He could see wariness in their eyes as they eyed him quickly and kept going. He looked like he'd just walked out of the wilderness and he didn't care as he crossed his arms over his chest and watched the preparations for the performance. It was the second time she glanced that he knew he'd found her.
He had spied her earlier, scurrying around as her name was called, it didn't prove he had found her. A lot of women carried the name of Grace. He was patient and he waited. She had seen him in the morning because he let her by walking through the square. He had wanted to see her closer. She fit the description he had been given, but he could find several even now as he leaned on the tree that would match her description.
She was given the job of lighting the lanterns that would illuminate the stage and as she came back through the curtains, she glanced at him again as she had when she'd come from the wagon with a arm full of material. No one else in the troupe was paying him much mind. He wasn't the only person standing and watching with curiosity. Nor did he stand at the front of the group.
Someone called her name again and she scurried back to the wagon where the actors were readying themselves. The minstrel was strumming his guitar when she came back out and ran across to the other wagon and disappeared inside it running back across to the second wagon.
The minstrel laughed at her as she came back out, blowing air toward the hair in her face but she grinned and then another glance his way. The Minstrel looked up at the sky as it continued to darken. Already, a crowd and massed on the other side of the curtain. The minstrel started strumming and started singing. Grace pulled the curtain aside for him and followed him through. They would sing and get the audience to join with them until the sky darkened further, to allow for time to get the full effectual use of the night's back drop against the tragic tale waiting to unfold.
Reed was patient. He would wait.

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