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Moa
Novel: Once upon a taniwha
Genre: Young Adult & Youth
42,281 words so far  

About Moa

Location: Wellington, where it's spring, down Aotearoa way.

Home Region:
Australia & New Zealand :: New Zealand

Age:50

Favorite music: Today: KPLU's 24hr jazz webcast all the way from Seattle

Joined: October 6, 2009

This Year: Official Participant

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Brief Author Bio:

Raised in a large and verbal family, I shied away from playing with language for fun. The corrections, well intentioned but frequent were just too discouraging and I buried my nose in other people's words rather than let mine come to light. I studied science, put it to work in the behaviour of people in organisations, and have been fortunate in travelling for my work and curiousity. Hearing and reading my mother tongue used and the fifth or sixth language of others made me aware of an aspect I treasured in setting down feelings, thoughts and sensations in words, to look at later and to share. My work requires a concise and apparently reasoned kind of language, yet I am keenly aware of my inability to help people do what they want to do without rousing emotions, and challenging the dragons of their fears. It's just not very expressive.
Apart from a very encouraging English teacher in my last year at high school, wordsmithing has been work for me. I like it, I do it but it's work. In recent months, an angel has encouraged me to write for pleasure, finishing a first draft of a book of illustrated poems that have grown up with my son, now seven. Casting about for a Nanowrimo topic, I realised that I could write a chapter for each poem, keep the pictures and make something really worth having for Christmas. Whether it's worth having after Christmas is another matter - the audience will determine whether it's worth printing even one copy. Four short chapters down, it feels like there are another thirty to come and that's about the right number of words. If November is kind, and the words write themselves nicely, I'll rescan the illustrations in December and bind in time for a not-so-small boy's delight. He's already heard the first six chapters and wants more, so at least something's working. On it goes. One word after another.

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Synopsis: Once upon a taniwha

In Maori lore, taniwha have inhabited the land, air and water of Aotearoa / New Zealand since the sky and the earth were separated. Before Spike was one, Frank had made him a song about ‘Fred the magic taniwha’ who lived by the sea in a land called Hataitai. Peter, Paul and Mary gave the tune and Whataitai was a taniwha from the waters near our home. In Spike’s second year, he asked for pictures and a story. Then he began to ask for drawings of taniwha doing particular things. ‘Fish’ was Spike’s first word, so they were included. And berries and marshmallows arrived as treats. Time passed and Spike began to draw his own pictures and to suggest words for the poems which began to grow alongside. Now Frank offers drawings and poems; Spike tests rhythms and rhymes and antics. These taniwha continue their role as guardians of places and of all the living things that belong in them. How better to protect than with love, laughter and a lick?
Our taniwha says:
“I was not given life to go about being sour and keep to myself that which my ancestors knew. I was given life to grow and learn, to mix and test, and to respect the ways of others as I go.
So I play a lot – or so I’m told – and get bored with doing nothing. I’d rather be chasing a volcano fish in the sea, climbing a tree for fruit or swimming through clouds to see who comes out the most wet.
Here are some of my adventures”

1. I am a taniwha
My name is Fred
I used to sleep
Under Spike’s bed
And Spike has asked that I tell the story of how I came to be under his bed, where I lived before that and of all the wonderful things I have seen in my adventures. Being a taniwha, I don’t know much about my family. Once we get big enough to leave the nest, we travel around a lot and sometimes don’t see anyone we know for ages. But I’m getting ahead of myself. I should start at the beginning then move on to the middle. And maybe we’ll reach the end a bit after that.

Excerpt: Once upon a taniwha

2. I was born from an egg
No nappies – just nude
I hatched when I was hungry
To look for more food
I was very hungry when I hatched. All day long, I had been scratching at the inside my egg. I could hear noises coming from outside and I wanted to know what was going on. I didn’t want to be left out. But being an egg, I was left in, not left out. My Dad told me that. He said I was explaining I inside out and tried to help me get it right. I think my Dad likes to make things complicated sometimes.
I had been scratching all day at my egg. I had worn a bit of a groove into a part of the skin around me, but there was not much room to move. I wriggled about, this way and that. My claws were quite sharp and I made a small tear in my shell. I could see light. Bright light! I was all excited now and wriggled my claws through the hole. Outside felt different. It was cold and dry. I wasn’t so sure now. Did I really want to leave the safe, wet, warmth of inside my egg? The noise outside started up again. I could hear better now. It was very loud, and a bit scary for a small taniwha. I felt around inside my egg. I was hungry and wanted to find something to eat. Nothing left. I had eaten all I could find already. There was only one thing for it. I had to get out of my egg.

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