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Novel: The House of Raeno
Genre: Other Genres
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About ultharkitty

Location: York, England

Home Region:
Europe :: England :: Elsewhere

Age:29

Website: http://www.livejournal.com/users/ultharkitty

Favorite novels: Doomsday Book by Connie Willis; The Drowning City by Amanda Downum; Notre Dame de Paris by Victor Hugo; I like plenty more, but these are the few that first come to mind.

Favorite writers: H P Lovecraft, Connie Willis, Amanda Downum, Clark Ashton Smith, Susannah Clark, Alan Campbell, Terry Pratchett, Diana Wynn Jones

Favorite music: Blood and bones music, anything from Mozart to Metallica

Non-noveling interests: Building corsets, architectural history, art history, perfume, making jewellery, transformers, 2000AD, notre dame de paris, cthulhu mythos, LARP

Joined: October 26, 2004

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'04 '05

NaNoWriMo posts: 2

NaNoWriMo buddies: 12

 

Brief Author Bio:

Like most people I know, I have more hobbies than time.

Damn, there was going to be actual content here, wasn't there?

*thinks*

I'm an art historian who likes to create stuff. I love good CGI, and have recently developed an obsession with giant alien robots. Needless to say, I have a strong 'oooooh shiny...' impulse.

I write because I enjoy it. I love every stage of the process, from hashing out a first draft, to the countless hours spent editing and polishing until I've got something that I'm approaching pleased with.

I write what I want to read, and for some reason this often seems to accord with what a fair few other people want to read, which is nice.

Synopsis: The House of Raeno

I'm not starting a novel from scratch this year, but I hope to add at least 50k to a long-running project (I'll only count new words, obviously). OK, so, a synopsis...

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The Amvarian Church is in crisis. The words of the prophet Trurenius have been warped, perverted to the use of corrupt decadents and self-serving politicians. Heresy is rife, abuse of power a given. While the High Cardinal moulders on his deathbed, the Archbishop of Deiben indulges private desires and turns a blind eye to the destruction wrought by the zealous Bishop Pronatei, hunting vampire familiars in the mountainous hinterlands.

In the merchant town of Varnaliek, Alidah Saroldi loses her mother to Pronatei's purges. In fear for her life, she flees, taking a lonely road to an unknown destination. Grief and hunger lead her to the merchant city of Chatliek, jewel of the mountains, where she finds sanctuary in the home of the demon-haunted Antoni Raeno, cousin to the Archbishop.

Alidah convalesces in unaccustomed luxury. Avarice awakened, she re-forges herself, making bargains and alliances, determined to cling on to her new life. As she learns to manipulate those around her, she begins to peel back the secrets of the House of Raeno, and to discover the hidden legacy of her own past.

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I wrote that synopsis to help give some direction to the book, after reading about a technique where you write the synopsis first and then the novel. As I never plan or outline, because I find it unhelpful and stifling, I thought this would be an interesting chellenge.

This book has gone through several incarnations, and the previous (scrapped) draft weighed in at 70k. This version is currently just over 33k long, and I'm using NaNoWriMo to hopefully find the UberPlot, get the subplots ticking away, and - Great Cthulhu willing - get a first draft bashed out.

As far as genre goes, this is dark fantasy with a pinch of SF, and it owes a massive debt to my obsession with the fifteenth century.

Excerpt: The House of Raeno

Gethryn moaned, dredged from inconsistent dreams by a persistent dull thudding. He shifted against the tabletop, warmed by the press of his cheek, and opened his eyes briefly. Still dark, not dawn yet. No time for visitors, but the thudding continued, loud enough to wake the dead. Loud enough to wake the household; the thought snatched him and yanked him awake. Blearily, he ran his tongue over his sleep-furred teeth and heaved himself up.

“All right all right, shut up,” he said. He fumbled at his belt for his keys, and stepped out of the gate-keeper’s lodge and into the chill of the pre-dawn twilight. The pounding continued, and with it a scrabbling, as of nails on wood. A sudden keening stilled his heart and made his blood run cold.

“Lordship?” he asked, but there was no answer. He glanced around; the empty courtyard was awash with mooncast shadows, and only the softest, ordinary noises came from the stables. “Amvar preserve me,” he said, then, in a whisper so low as to have almost no breath behind it at all, “Kemest, keep me safe.”

Hands shaking, he unlocked the viewing window in the lesser door, and swung the panel down. He didn’t put his face too close to the wood, but glanced out into the space a visitor’s face should rightly be. There was no one there.

Regardless, something was breathing. A shuddering, rattling sound, that seemed to hitch for a moment before the scrabbling began anew.

“Who’s there?” he snapped. “Show yourself.”

The keening picked up again, high and sorrowful, and the thought struck Gethryn that this noise would follow him to the grave.

“I said who’s there. Answer, or there’ll be hell to pay.”

“I said help me!” It was little more than a whisper on the cruel breeze. “Let me in, you have to let me in!”

“Stand, so I can see you,” Gethryn said. “And stop banging, you’ll wake everyone up.”

The keening rose, turned into a wailing sob, then dissolved into a hacking cough in which words could be discerned only infrequently. “Can’t… can’t… Let me in!”

Gethryn unsheathed his knife and jabbed the point through the open window. When nothing new happened, he followed it slowly with his face. There was a dark bundle on the cobbles below, but the angle denied him a clear view.

“Get back,” Gethryn said, “so’s I can see you.”

The coughing continued, but the bundle shuffled back jerkily. A white face, pale as the silver moon, looked up at him, and Gethryn felt the cobbles vanish from beneath his feet.
Bright eyes stared, wide and glistening, leaking dark liquid. Pale lips quivered, streaked with black. “I beg of you,” it said. “Please, let me in.”

Gethryn shook his head, retreated. Trouble, this was certainly trouble. His knife fell from his grip, and he found himself skidding across the cobblestones, sprinting for the door to the main house.
He went as quickly and as quietly as he could, but his boots made a terrible clatter on the stairs, and even the waxed canvas of his coat rustled abominably loud.

“Stefan, sir.” He knocked on the steward’s door as hard as he dared. “Sir, we have a…” He couldn’t finish. What did they have? A problem? A demon? He had no idea. Something bad, he thought, the vision of that snow-pale face at the forefront of his mind even as he knocked again, a little harder this time.

The door opened. “What’s wrong?” Stefan asked. He didn’t look as though he’d just woken up, didn’t even look as though he’d been to sleep. “Out with it.”
“I… Come quick, at the gate.” Gethryn gestured for Stefan to follow, and headed back down the stairs. He couldn’t explain it, not out loud, so he hoped that Stefan could hear his thoughts, that the steward would know what he wanted to say without him having to say it.

Back at the High Gate, the scrabbling had begun again.

“Just there,” Gethryn said, pointing at the door.

“Who’s there?” Stefan asked. He held his hand out towards Gethryn. Fumbling, Gethryn removed the keys from his belt and handed them over. With every fibre of his being, from his skin to his bones, he wanted to cry out ‘no!’ and stop Stefan from opening the door, but Gethryn held back by the wall, and noticed too late that his knife was no longer on him.

Stefan swung the door open. “I said, who are you?”

Gethryn edged forwards, stopping only at the sight of that shining face. There was a hand, too, he could now see, clutched tight against a distended stomach. It was swathed in a thick cloak, but portions of paler clothing could be seen, and all of it looked streaked with filth.

“Help me,” the creature said, staring up at Stefan. It extended a claw, its free hand Gethryn realised, and dropped something on the floor at Stefan’s feet. It gleamed dully, but Gethryn couldn’t make out what it was. “Please, they’ll kill me…”

“You should be dead,” Stefan said, glancing down at the object. The creature cringed, silent, head bowed. After a moment, its shoulders started to shake. Stefan made an exasperated noise, and picked up whatever the creature had dropped. “Be thankful Kerell isn’t here,” he said. “You can come in. Get up.”

“It can’t get up,” Gethryn said. “It’s hurt.”

Stefan gave him a look that he couldn’t interpret, but that nonetheless made him wish he’d never spoken. “Get back to your post,” he said. “I’ll deal with him.”

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