Okay, we've got one for the first sentence, so I thought I'd ask about the last sentence.
"The universe awaits the power of God, and it begins with us."
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I am... You!!
QueenOfAmber |
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Nov 28, 2007 - 22 55 |
Okay, we've got one for the first sentence, so I thought I'd ask about the last sentence. "The universe awaits the power of God, and it begins with us." ---------- I am... You!! |
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Nov 29, 2007 - 03 50
Wow, that's really powerful.
I'm not exactly sure what mine is going to be but I should get cracking since I'm gonna need it in about 10K... I'm thinking something like...
"And they went their separate ways."
Y'know? Really cheesy and corny and somehow meaningful.
----------Those who eat pie live longer.
2007: Waddle 118K
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Nov 29, 2007 - 04 37
I'm a bit like Junaberry. I'm not exactly sure but maybe something like this.
Scott stood by the Angel Gate and took Deacan's hand, as hard as he tried, he could no longer feel the hatred.
(Deacan is the guy who killed his girlfriend.)
Jeff
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Nov 29, 2007 - 10 38
“I’m trying to write this one part,” David began.
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NaNo 2006: THE BLACK HEART - YA urban fantasy - WINNER!
NaNo 2007: THE WITCH BOOK (working title) - MG urban fantasy - WINNER!
54,705 / 50,000
Nov 29, 2007 - 12 02
I'm gonna cheat and post the last two sentences:
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2007: Firmness of Rock (54705 words, Winner!)
2006: The Story of Jack (51846 words, Winner!)
2006 Spade (50344 words, Winner!)
52,881 / 50,000
Nov 29, 2007 - 13 32
"We are going to be seniors!" says Elaine.
30,387 / 50,000
Nov 29, 2007 - 14 31
I haven't even come close to finishing, but my last sentence was one of the first things I thought of ironically. Anyways, here it is:
And so, Queen Callia's last command was heeded.
50,790 / 50,000
Nov 29, 2007 - 15 45
“Let’s go home,” she said. “I have seen enough today to last me a lifetime.”
Not exactly a work of art, but anything after 50k is beautiful...
----------(First novel: Castle Island)
Nano '06: The Lemon Tea Summer
Screnzy '07: Eight Weeks of Pizza
Nano '07: The Twelfth Stone
50,167 / 50,000
Nov 29, 2007 - 16 26
"Where the hell are my pants?"
Which is also the first sentence in my novel.
50,026 / 50,000
Nov 29, 2007 - 19 51
I guess I would see him tomorrow.
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Nov 29, 2007 - 19 54
Max had swallowed a bar of lemon honey soap and was blowing bubbles out of his mouth while Rex, delightedly, was popping them with the horn on his head.
----------Nothing ventured nothing gained.
Today is a great day for a revolution.
IMAGINE-BELIEVE-ACHIEVE
you are the change in the world
Own your life for it is all yours.
When in doubt belly dance, consume chocolate and drink champange- the answer will s
50,209 / 50,000
Nov 30, 2007 - 09 44
“I’ll be around. I have to remind you what you’re fighting for.”
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Nov 30, 2007 - 14 34
"Okay."
51,075 / 50,000
Nov 30, 2007 - 15 15
"And in my head, there was beautiful a silence."
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Nov 30, 2007 - 15 57
The last sentence of my COMPLETED NaNo novel? ^^
"I'm all for keeping dangerous weapons out of the hands of fools. Let's start with typewriters." - Solomon Short
50,160 / 50,000
Nov 30, 2007 - 17 27
"Bring the holy water," I murmured into the phone. " I have a feeling we're going to need it."
118,026 / 50,000
Nov 30, 2007 - 19 22
Hm, finished my NaNo last night and came up with a very corny last line..
When I died, however many years from now, I would be proud and I would be happy and I would be loved.
----------Those who eat pie live longer.
2007: Waddle 118K
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Nov 30, 2007 - 20 46
Adriana watched the last tree fall, and was happy to know that in generations to come, the forest would become a place for those of all talents to be in.
*I'm on the editing stage now, and it will probably change...*
----------I think. I dream. I write.
57,045 / 50,000
Nov 30, 2007 - 23 07
Okay, so mine doesn't make sense without the rest of the paragraph, but here it is in all its cheesy glory......
Well, maybe he would visit them in a couple of days.
----------SF '08 -- Open At All Hours
55,943 / 50,000
Nov 30, 2007 - 23 37
Here's mine:
Wiry Fellows
A lively tale of adventure on the Pony Express trail. Because the mail MUST go through, no matter what.
51,752 / 50,000
Dic 1, 2007 - 20 22
Here's mine:
I wondered if those uniforms came in my size.
----------2005 "And Justice For All" --- Win
2006 "Redemption" --- Win
2007 "10-41 David" --- Win !!!
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Dic 9, 2007 - 15 30
It goes something like:
"Claire turned and walked away from the shocked faces of Anne Hawke and Kenny Seater, waiting until they couldn't see her face to smile. She didn't need them. She could do this on her own."
But of course she can't, or I have no room for any sort of sequel. ^_^
16,169 / 50,000
Dic 12, 2007 - 09 07
I am also going to cheat and post the last paragraph. it is not from my nano novel.
Both the horses stopped at the same time and Jeff grabbed her by the waist, swinging her down from Stone's back. Jeff and Tori's lips met in a loving embrace. At that moment, Tori Mason knew that everything was going to be alright.
:) That is, until the new kid moves in in the sequal.
----------Nano 2007 --- The Planter's War
Script Frenzy 2007 --- The LIfe and Adventures of Barnaby McJunior
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Bella, The Danger Magnet --- Twilight
98% Human, 2% Bird WE SOAR --- maximum ride
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Dic 12, 2007 - 09 10
here is the one from my nano novel... even though I havnt finished it yet, i know the ending paragraph.
"Just take care of her, Darnell. I cant take any more of this today." Alexa slumped against the tree.
Darnell walked to the little girl, who swung blond curls over her shoulder. "Look, I'm sorry, but we cant have anyone around here right now."
"My name is [insert name here]. I'm human, and I want you to train me to become a planter." The little girl's blue eyes twinkled.
The group of Rebels raised thier heads, and stared in amazement. Serafina stood up, crossing her arms over her chest.
"No."
----------Nano 2007 --- The Planter's War
Script Frenzy 2007 --- The LIfe and Adventures of Barnaby McJunior
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Bella, The Danger Magnet --- Twilight
98% Human, 2% Bird WE SOAR --- maximum ride
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Dic 17, 2007 - 18 32
"Believe me or not I just don't care because that's the way it really happened...."
----------Sincerely.
BJ LEE : Ghost.Scriber@gmail.com
- 2008 Charlotte NC Co - ML with Psuedo Joe
- 2007 Charlotte NC ML & NaNo WInner
- 2006 Charlotte NC Co-ML with Richard Smith
- 2005 NaNoWriMo Participant & Winner
- 2004 NaNo LURKER & unofficial winner
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Dic 28, 2007 - 11 32
Hehe, great.
Mine is:
I think there is not an “old” Laura Suite, or a “new” Laura Suite – just an ever-changing Laura Suite, with a name that is not glued to a certain moment or a certain time.
----------And who knows what this Laura Suite will do.
Kenza
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Ene 9, 2008 - 13 49
I didn't have enough words by the time I was ready to be done.......so my novel ends, "And they all blew up."
----------Novel '06-Raisin In Taboo.................................................................failed miserably
NaNo '07-A Novel About Some Girls Who Do Some Stuff...........Yay! Finished!
ScriptFrenzy '08-Duplicity...........................................
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Mayo 3, 2008 - 21 46
Well, I really like the last lines of two of my in-progress novellas that are my spring/summer projects. They all both sort of cheesy, but they ring nicely for me and I am pretty proud of them, though not nessecarily of the novels in which they close. Both novellas are in shambles at the moment and I can't wait to edit them.P.S: They might be more than one sentance.
Novella 1) Backstory: Okay, so my protagonist, Abby, had been infected with a deadly disease that is marked by the milky-violet film that settles over the iris. She's been cured of the disease and it's been three months since she was released from the hospital and she's been feeling really dizzy and not so great lately, so she goes to the washroom to calm down.
"When she saw, when she finally saw her explanation, she had to shove her fist agianst her mouth to keep from screaming. There, over her vivid green irises, was a thin film of violet."
Unfortuantly, I have no ideas for a sequel, so all is pretty muh lost with this one.
Novella 2) This one is about an epidemic of a disease (I have a thing about disease) called "The Number" that has infected the Earth and are possesing people who are infected to kill themselves or kill others. Molly, a blind girl, and her brother, Gregory, have survived the epidemic and are now standing in the rain as the rest of the survivors look down on the destruction. Molly has been having this weird feeling about the epidemic and she can't place a finger on what it is and that's where the sentance starts.
"And then she knew. She knew like she had never known before."
I have a thing about cliffies as well. I love all the other ending lines on this thread. They're all so good!
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"To days of inspiration, playing hookey, making something out of nothing, the need to *express*, to communicate."-La Vie Boheme A, "RENT"
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Mayo 4, 2008 - 18 34
"After looking at it thoughtfully, I take my hand and wrap it around the whole cup, wiping it clean."
----------“You lot, you spend all your time thinking about dying, like you're gonna get killed by eggs, or beef, or global warming, or asteroids. But you never take time to imagine the impossible. Like maybe you survive.”
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Mayo 9, 2008 - 00 40
lol. My last sentence of my now COMPLETE ( Yay \o/ Yay) draft of my NaNo 2007 novel Whispers of the Dark is.... *drumroll*
Life went on.