What do you think of this title?

KarenChii
What do you think of this title?

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Feb 20, 2008 - 09 39

I'm writing about pixies that have been integrated into society, and now run it. Humans are oppressed. The main character is a young pixie that's being forced to work and all she wants is to quit.

A secondary plot is that her mother and father, who broke up 6 years ago, are running into each other and are going to fall back in love.

My working title is "Where Pixies Rule."

Do you like that title? Do you have another idea?
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Sam Junno

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Mar 4, 2008 - 14 59

I think it's a fine title. Intriguing.

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resg
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Mar 6, 2008 - 12 01

I like your title too, it describes the story but doesn't reveal too much. I thought about a variation of it, something like "The Pixies Era". As I said in the thread I created (thanks for helping by the way!) I'm terrible with titles, my stories should generate them for me from dust or something :)

Collie

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Mar 30, 2008 - 09 28

It sounds like a good story, but I don't like the title. It just doesn't grab me and make me interested.

This is the pot calling the kettle black, though. XD I think up the worst titles.

Mandragora_Autu...Glowing Halo
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Mar 31, 2008 - 05 24

Sounds like an interesting story but I think the title feels a little too literal for me. I like titles that are a little abstract.

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takingoverskies

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Abr 13, 2008 - 20 00

I think the titles fine, and I really like your plot for the novel!

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