Numbers in text...

Jjacks48
Numbers in text...

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Nov 5, 2009 - 08 50

I'm writing dialogue right now..which is more acceptable:

“I’ve got two different projects coming up."

or

"I've got 2 different projects coming up."

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Generally, you should spell out the numbers one to ten, but use numerals for 11 and above, until you get to one hundred (but one thousand, but 11 thousand).

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The Chicago Manual of Style says to spell out whole numbers through one hundred as well as round numbers (like one thousand).

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wonderer wrote:
The Chicago Manual of Style says to spell out whole numbers through one hundred as well as round numbers (like one thousand).

That's what I do.

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I spell out numbers 1-20 (I think that's the MLA rule - or it used to be - it does tend to change over time), and I ALWAYS spell out numbers in dialogue. It just doesn't read right to me if you're quoting a character like: "He gave me 308 marbles." So I write it: "He gave me three hundred and eight marbles."

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I always spell out numbers if they're being used to count something. If they're used as a date or something like a room number, I use the digits instead.

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Nov 5, 2009 - 11 00

As a history major, I've been taught with Chicago-style. Therefore, I agree with the comment above. Write out one through one hundred, and round numbers like a thousand. Anything else can be written out in numerical form. :)

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Awesome. Thanks.
I've been so busy trying to get my word count going that I forget to pull out my MLA handbook :)

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I'm going out on a limb here -- do whatever gives you the biggest word count. For example:

1,285 = one word

One thousand two hundred eighty five = six words!

I know, I know; terribly incorrect. Then again, six words versus one word! ;-)

Just remember to fix it in December.

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Jjacks48

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Bozoette wrote:
I'm going out on a limb here -- do whatever gives you the biggest word count. For example:

1,285 = one word

One thousand two hundred eighty five = six words!

I know, I know; terribly incorrect. Then again, six words versus one word! ;-)

Just remember to fix it in December.

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Nov 5, 2009 - 22 56

In fiction I always write out numbers, no matter how big, because it makes a difference to the flow of a sentence whether a number is "one thousand, one hundred," or "eleven hundred," and so on. I would only use numerals in a case where there were numerals in the story, such as if the characters were reading the number on a computer readout.

I think this goes double for dialogue. It doesn't make too much of a difference when the number is "2," but if a character is giving, say, his phone number, I want to hear whether he says "one two zero seven" or "one two oh seven" or "twelve oh seven," or whatever.

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