I know this happens in the genre forums all the time, but well, I'm curious as to what the people in my home region are writing!!! So, if you guys are game, what about a little constructive criticism on our pieces?
Read the excerpt of the WriMo who posted above you. Tell us what you think, offer some suggestions, and then wait for someone to do the same to you.
Also, if you could post the name of the person you're evaluating as well as your review, because occasionally more than one person replies at once and things can get confusing. :)
@ the person that gets mine...
It's in my Novel Synopsis!
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"The first draft of anything is shit." Ernest Hemingway
