Thoughts on current novel in progress

DarksKitten
Thoughts on current novel in progress

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Nov 8, 2009 - 09 39

Vampyre Princess leaves a world of royalty and solace in search of a haunting dream that leads her to a new world of un speakable enslavement of all women.
is the synopsis feel free to take a look at my page for an excerpt of the first few pages.

I would love comments or tips to the trade as this will be my first novel to get a full review by anyone other than me.
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Neushorn

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Nov 8, 2009 - 13 05

How about posting in one of the "Evaluate the above poster's ..." threads. You put some effort in reviewing what someone else has written and in return someone reviews what you have written. I think it's much more likely to get you a response than this topic.

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larelmian

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Nov 8, 2009 - 13 58

Here is a link to the evaluating excerpts page: http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/node/3359620

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DarksKitten

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Nov 8, 2009 - 16 20

Thank you greatly for your help and I have followed your advice and posted to the evaluate thread. This is my first Nanowrimo and hope to continue it in the following years as well

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