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Katrinia17
Novel: Fragmented Evidence
Genre: Mainstream Fiction
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About Katrinia17

Location: Washington USA

Home Region:
United States :: Washington :: Tacoma/Pierce County

Age:28

Website: http://Writing.Com/authors/katrinia17

Favorite novels: Complete Works of Emily Dickinson, The Doll House Murderes, Little Witch, The Easter Egg Artist, It's Me Christine, Illiad, Lord of the Rings, Hitch Hikers Guide

Favorite writers: Emily Dickinson (poetry), Betty Ren Wright (childrens)

Favorite music: Whatever I'm in the mood for

Non-noveling interests: Childrens rights, Art, History and Music

Joined: Octubre 2, 2007

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'07

NaNoWriMo posts: 8

NaNoWriMo buddies: 7

 

Brief Author Bio:

V.E.L Edgar (aka Katrinia17) is a 28 year old freelance writer who has moved from her home state of Arizona to Washington with her husband, who is in the United States Army, and their 3 children. During her travels around the country she spends her time writing short stories, poetry, lyrics, scripts, children’s work and novels. You can find many of her written works at http://Writing.Com/authors/katrinia17.

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Synopsis: Fragmented Evidence

With a woman murdered and few clues as to who the killer is, Detective Gilbert Blyth picks up on an unseemly piece of evidence, a children’s book. With nothing else to go on but the gut feeling that a child is in danger, he tries to convince his partner, Maryanne Lexin (Lexi for short) and Captain Donahue that their mystery isn’t about who the murderer is but, is about the who and where of this unknown child. As Detective Blyth uncovers the clues he learns of his victim’s life of abuse, redemption and attempt at a new start and it’s a discovery that opens up old wounds and allows him to examine his own past and how it has continued to affect his life.

His self examination leaves him re-evaluating his relationship with his partner Detective Lexi and his brother Joseph. But before he can let go and allow himself to heal, the start of a new case and the end of his old case leave him with guilt as he yearns for the chance to move on with the possibility of a new love but finds that he can not let go of the responsibility, love and devotion brought on from his tragic past.

Excerpt: Fragmented Evidence

Tears trickled down her face, branching out across wet cheeks, running into smears of thickening blood and vomit before thinning out to the cracked corners of her mouth. Her jaw shook as her lips formed words, mouthing a cry for help. A wide streak of red made its way from her nose, stopping on the edge of her upper lip which quivered, splattering blood through the air.

What past her upper lip overlapped and swirled into clear saliva before dribbling, falling from her mouth, adding to the pool of slick vomit and coagulating blood. Arms stretched flailing about, finely mixing the salt, the sour and harsh liquor into a medium that her fingers, unknowingly painted circles in, as she desperately sought a way out. The fear of death, as cold as the winter wind gust of upstate New York, whipped through her body before the warmth of exhaustion proceeded to over whelm the dull pain that made its way through her.

Suddenly her attacker stood up, letting go of the grip, and sending her partially suspended body crashing, her chin smashing, point first, before her forehead bounced off the tile floor. Tighten skin from her previously distorted face splintered and exposed living tissue. She laid there, eyes closed, sprawled in the contents from her stomach, not wanting to move, waiting and listening to the sound of foot steps and a door as it closed, sending deafening echoes through the floor.

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