Dawn
an excerpt

Dawn's vampire scene!
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He brought her close to him so that she was hard against his chest. "Finally," he purred, getting affectionally close to her neck again. As before, she was facing away from him and he was uncomfortably close. This had been his plan! Belinda was to be the distraction, she was to be his own personal victim, and then he'd sneak away into the night! With a sudden loss of breath, here it came...

Two daggers pierced her neck deep, very deep. It was agony. She couldn't stop herself from crying out. Tears were forming in her eyes. If she had ever experienced worse pain, it was too long ago to remember. Given her background, that spoke volumes. She clung to him tightly. It was almost unbearable. She could feel the blood slipping from her neck into his mouth and even that sensation was unbearable. Slowly, she was losing her energy. She had to do something quick or she would die!

So she did the only thing she could think of that she would be in a position to do; she flung her foot in one quick motion behind her and straight up as hard as she could. She had got him in that vital area and he broke away quickly; she whipped around and caught him, red in the face, and brought down her jaws onto his neck front on, forcing each row of teeth onto his neck and biting down hard. The feel of the flesh and the crunch of the throat disgusted her but she kept biting down hard as if simply trying to a particularly hard piece of candy.

To her surprise, she managed to break through, digging into the throat and tasting his blood. She gulped down all that she could fit in her mouth without letting it spill over the sides. But it did, running dark down her face. At first she thought that this too was disgusting, but then she started to enjoy it. As soon as she did, she started gulping it down more readily, more hungrily. She quite literally couldn't control herself.

The whole time he struggled to get her off him and out of this vice - for once when she fought back, she was winning, she was hurting him badly this person who had tried to hurt her! It was thrilling and this only added to her hunger. But the struggle was getting more difficult and soon she'd lose her grip on him.

She did, and it flung her backward. She stumbled a few steps and there was a moment of sickly surprise as she fell away onto the dirt. Still lying there, she sat up halfway to see him, and she realised she was lying in the spot where the two boys had tried to take advantage of Belinda, as she then saw, beside her victimiser, Belinda being held between them. She was very scared and her clothes were ripped. Dawn's victimiser was furious as hell. Now she'd have to face this very looming danger, more terrifying than she had ever faced with either of her parents even her father when she stabbed him.

And he leapt at her. He pinned her down and his dagger-teeth claimed their second victim on her body, her right shoulder. It was on the same side of her that his first bite had landed, and it bled as readily and as much as before. Though he drank all that he could, this was no clean bite like it would've been in fiction. Not unless he licked it clean later, but surely there had to be at least a little more blood left to creep back, right? Right?

The flood of pain came sweeping back when his teeth plunged sharply back into her skin. Once again she felt like screaming. Her skin burst open around both spots, but the shoulder was all the more intense because it was happening at that moment, not just as backup because both were connected.

It was twice the pain as before, so Dawn couldn't suppress a scream as long and loud as her lungs would allow. She felt weak at that moment, because she hadn't screamed like that since she was little and surely she was far too old now, being 15, for such nonsense. She was sure they'd think she was pitiful now - she sure did!