At the write-in last night we were saying that it would be good to know when people posted new excerpts in their Author Profiles.
At this point, I know that Ziggi, WordTraveller and I have posted excerpts. Has anyone else?
Tell us here, and then we'll all run over to your profile and check it out.
Remember, though, if you are giving any kind of feedback in November, that everyone's Inner Editor has been given the month off!
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Gale . . . www.ThornesQuest.com . . . or . . . www.StringingWords.net





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nov. 3, 2007 - 07 41
Done!
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nov. 3, 2007 - 08 25
I've got an excerpt done if anyone wants to see it. Its short, only two paragraphs or so.
----------My .02
~Ammietia
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nov. 3, 2007 - 09 20
ditto mine is up
-----------Tristan Johnson
Author of Tonatiuh
http://tonatiuhnovel.blogspot.com/
Last Update 8/29/08: Chapter 2
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nov. 3, 2007 - 09 47
I have one up too.
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nov. 3, 2007 - 09 53
Mine is up, but it's probably going to be changing constantly so keep an eye out!
----------You see things; and you say 'Why?' But I dream things that never were; and I say 'Why not?
-George Bernard Shaw
None of us is as stupid as all of us!
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nov. 3, 2007 - 11 57
Mine is up too.
Read a few others, and I must say, damn you people are good.
----------wordcount widgets
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nov. 3, 2007 - 12 03
Haha, even though this might not apply to me, I'm saying thank you:P
I shall read everyone's asap. I just need to write a little more! *Is crazy*
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Ziggle Blindy McDeaferson Wall D.W. Abba Abba Jo Lichken Treagol Walking-Talking-Map Princess Skull Winter!
ScriptFrenzy '08: The Attendants (4 episodes [hour long each])
Nanowrimo '07: Volens Piscis (79K)
Nanowrimo '06: Halydon (50K)
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nov. 3, 2007 - 12 26
Swans are beautiful creatures; elegant and slender. They look magnificent, and are often associated with love.
But if you've ever seen a swan up close, you'd know what they were really like. They're vicious and will attack almost anything that gets in their way. The Romans used to use them as guard dogs.
Swans are attacking me.
e-mail me if you would like the entire intro. i'd rather not post it on here.
----------megan.elizabeth.yo@hotmail.com
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nov. 4, 2007 - 05 47
Littlemisslizzy, it's fine that you posted here -- and ooooh! intriguing beginning! -- but there is another thread, called "Writing Swap", for people who want to share excerpts privately, by e-mail. Here's the link:
http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/node/1042936
----------Gale . . . www.ThornesQuest.com . . . or . . . www.StringingWords.net
56,596 / 50,000
nov. 4, 2007 - 06 05
Mine's up too!
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nov. 4, 2007 - 07 11
Posted an excerpt on my profile finally. Do be kind on your comments! ^_^
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nov. 4, 2007 - 08 19
I'm going to be changing mine on Tuesday, so if anyone wants to give me feedback before I take it down please do ^^
----------You see things; and you say 'Why?' But I dream things that never were; and I say 'Why not?
-George Bernard Shaw
None of us is as stupid as all of us!
50,979 / 50,000
nov. 4, 2007 - 09 02
Nice, Welestra. Gotta love the scary cult wackos in fantasy fiction! But, I think your Prince is in trouble: the evil chalice is whispering to him! *shock*
Wow, Carasin. Very powerful. When the little boy tracked his father's blood in footprints across the carpet? Wow.
Mmmm, infojunkie, an identity mystery. Cool. *wants more* ----------
Gale . . . www.ThornesQuest.com . . . or . . . www.StringingWords.net
112,245 / 50,000
nov. 4, 2007 - 11 19
Gale: great excerpt. Very intriguing - and mysterious! I want to know who those two mystery figures were!
Infojunkie: Suspenseful excerpt. Is she or isn't she the one? I love it.
Viorica: Good excerpt. Definitely want to know who the stranger is and what his deal is.
TristanPEJ: Great world building! I like how the two races you write about are kind of a twist on a common race. Very original stuff, I liked it.
girlwithapearl Intriguing excerpt. Lucky and Stephanie seem so different, but look like they'll get along. Can't wait to hear how it turns out.
Carasin Mysterious and really well written. I love it when the characters do something a little out of the ordinary for them, and not entirely sure why. Great stuff.
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nov. 4, 2007 - 13 41
OMG, I can't wait for Tuesday now!
Carasin I can tell you right now, from what I just read from that excerpt....if it was already a finished novel , I would want to read that book !
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nov. 4, 2007 - 13 57
I might move ahead a chapter once a week or something I'll give chapter 1 on Monday
-----------Tristan Johnson
Author of Tonatiuh
http://tonatiuhnovel.blogspot.com/
Last Update 8/29/08: Chapter 2
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nov. 4, 2007 - 16 11
Okay, I put one up yesterday I think... I may update it tonight. I've reached the end of section 1, with just over 10k at this point - go me!
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nov. 4, 2007 - 21 10
I wrote this really funny chapter my friend dared me to do and as soon as I get my story on a computer with internet its guna go up.
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Read this one quick kiddies, the next excerpt is going up tomorrow night!
P.S. Reading everyone else' tomorrow, also! Can't wait.
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Ziggle Blindy McDeaferson Wall D.W. Abba Abba Jo Lichken Treagol Walking-Talking-Map Princess Skull Winter!
ScriptFrenzy '08: The Attendants (4 episodes [hour long each])
Nanowrimo '07: Volens Piscis (79K)
Nanowrimo '06: Halydon (50K)
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nov. 4, 2007 - 22 09
I've place mine up if anyone'd like to have a read. I'm curious to know what people think.
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nov. 6, 2007 - 14 09
Excerpt Updated : )
----------You see things; and you say 'Why?' But I dream things that never were; and I say 'Why not?
-George Bernard Shaw
None of us is as stupid as all of us!
79,000 / 50,000
nov. 6, 2007 - 15 14
Haha. Changed it. Y'all are gunna love it if you can get bast the lack of editting:-P Hilarity ensues in this! I took it from a dare of my friend's.
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Ziggle Blindy McDeaferson Wall D.W. Abba Abba Jo Lichken Treagol Walking-Talking-Map Princess Skull Winter!
ScriptFrenzy '08: The Attendants (4 episodes [hour long each])
Nanowrimo '07: Volens Piscis (79K)
Nanowrimo '06: Halydon (50K)
79,000 / 50,000
nov. 6, 2007 - 15 14
Haha. Changed it. Y'all are gunna love it if you can get bast the lack of editting:-P Hilarity ensues in this! I took it from a dare of my friend's. It's now half of the main plot of my stroy. Along with conspriacy theorists (this happened in the last two chapters and is mentioned in my excerpt, so be warned:-P)
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Ziggle Blindy McDeaferson Wall D.W. Abba Abba Jo Lichken Treagol Walking-Talking-Map Princess Skull Winter!
ScriptFrenzy '08: The Attendants (4 episodes [hour long each])
Nanowrimo '07: Volens Piscis (79K)
Nanowrimo '06: Halydon (50K)
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nov. 8, 2007 - 13 39
Breaking news: Richallyn has posted an excerpt!
----------Llyn
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nov. 8, 2007 - 14 25
Breaking news: Richallyn that's freakin awesome! *neeeeds moooore* *foams at mouth*
----------You see things; and you say 'Why?' But I dream things that never were; and I say 'Why not?
-George Bernard Shaw
None of us is as stupid as all of us!
50,055 / 50,000
nov. 8, 2007 - 20 12
Terribly silly excerpt posted.
----------Warning: One of my minor characters liberally salts his speech with a 19th century trade language called Chinook jargon!
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nov. 9, 2007 - 21 02
I just read Cheronyllie's excerpt. I recommend it for anyone who enjoys beautiful description and tantalising hints at heart-wrenching possibilities.
----------Llyn
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nov. 11, 2007 - 11 08
new excerpt up. It's a little... different. Shades of fanfic perhaps?
----------//--FantasyWriterGuy
http://fantasywriterguy.blogspot.com/
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nov. 11, 2007 - 14 07
Very fun excerpt, Rich!
I think I should post a new one, myself. I haven't changed it since day one.
----------Gale . . . www.ThornesQuest.com . . . or . . . www.StringingWords.net
24,508 / 50,000
nov. 11, 2007 - 14 26
Gonna be changing my excerpt, tomorrow, feedback on the current one would be appreciated ^^
----------You see things; and you say 'Why?' But I dream things that never were; and I say 'Why not?
-George Bernard Shaw
None of us is as stupid as all of us!
50,979 / 50,000
nov. 11, 2007 - 14 29
I posted a new excerpt as well.
----------Gale . . . www.ThornesQuest.com . . . or . . . www.StringingWords.net