i guess this would go under this heading...
...as the title suggests i am sluggishly writing away at a story i have had in mind for some time now... several years... and i know there is no way in h#ll i will finish it by the end of the month. Further more most is still in ROUGH copy form but i was wondering if i could get some Style and Formating critique back as opposed to spelling and grammer which i will fix at a later date. Any advice would be welcome...both good and bad.
http://WildernessMan.deviantart.com/art/Chapter-1-The-Law-of-Survival-55...
enjoy...(warning it is a bit bloody and there is violence)
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