Opening and Ending Line - apakah kalimat pembuka and penutup novel kalian? (awas jangan ada yang jawabnya "THE END" :P

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Opening and Ending Line - apakah kalimat pembuka and penutup novel kalian? (awas jangan ada yang jawabnya "THE END" :P
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Opening belon ada... masih bingung milihnya...
Ending:

...her dark green eyes closing lazily but her ears pricked up to listen in any interesting conversation.
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opening line:"Stop!"
ending line: “I understand, Asami-san. Thank you.”

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Opening line: ...unggas berwarna kegelapan itu membentangkan sayapnya

Ending line (temporary): Ki Seta melancarkan jurus Halimunan, dan ia menghilang dari pandangan Gagak Hitam bersama Silmë.

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Opening line: Suatu hari di sebuah kerajaan yang terletak di sebuah planet yang entah berapa puluh tahun cahaya jaraknya dari Bumi...

Ending line: Ah, Altare... Setelah ini, hari-hari akan semakin menyenangkan! Pasti!

Sebenarnya agak bingung, yang di atas itu ending line yang benernya apa bukan, ya.. :P (baca sendiri novelnya tar kalau mau tau kenapa Miyu bingung :P)

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@ ambu wow, jadi inget saur sepuh or wiro sableng! asiiik :P

@ miyu kenapa bingung sama ending line?

Aku novelnya belon selesai tapi endingnya udah jadi hehehe

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Hihi. Habis, setelah 'ending' yang itu, masih ada author's note, dan satu adegan kacau. Tapi masa ending linenya 'sutradara -eh- penulis memotong cerita hingga adegan ini', atau malah 'Ah, ya. Ceritanya tamat, iya, TAMAT, sampai di sini. Hihi.' *kabur*

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Aku mulai seru meng-edit hari ini... eh malah jadi nulis lagi and dapet tambahan 8k lagi he he

Tapi sekarang aku dapet opening line:

Light flickered gently through all the windows of the houses in the small town as the sun sets over the horizon.

cliche yahh???

namanya juga Tolkien rip-off hahaha

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kalimat pembuka saya pasangin quote dari film Before Sunset :

“Memory is a wonderful thing if you don’t have to deal with the past.” – Julie Delpy

trus bis itu sambungannya :

My name is Sandy Prawira. Just call me Andy. This isn’t a story about me. It’s about a girl who changed my life.

kalimat penutup belum terpikirkan nih, tapi pastinya bakalan ditutup ama quote juga
kali ini dari lagunya Train, Drops of Jupiter, yg mendasari cerita novel saya :

"Now that she’s back in the atmosphere…
…with drops of Jupiter in her hair, hey hey…
She acts like summer and walks like rain…
…reminds me that there’s time to change…"

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juin 4, 2008 - 23 24

ending belum lah ya. secara baru nyampe bab 5.

kalimat pembukanya:

"Kira-kira, begini kali ya perasaan Cinta selama nungguin Rangga?"

watashi wa kawa...

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juin 26, 2008 - 09 04

Klo kalimat pembuka gw lumayan old fashion....
Something like....: Sinar bulan masuk melewati jendela....

Yaah, begitulah... Memang bukan awal yg bagus. Now, about the ending, novelnya sih belum selesai, tapi gw sudah membayangkan sedikit soal endingnya. Latarnya suasana pernikahan and kata2nya kinda like this:

"....tak peduli dimanapun dia berada, aku yakin, dia pasti berbahagia."

Yeah, yeah.. I know... Ini jadul juga. Yah, apalah...

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