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tiakall
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Posted on:
nov. 8, 2009 - 12 48

Someone suggested this to me, but since he didn't post it, I'm going to. This is a place to leave sentences from your novel and let other people borrow them, as well as other people leaving theirs for you to borrow.

I'll start us off with a few:

"I can tell the difference between a live human and a dead human, thank you very much!"

"It doesn't exactly come with an instruction manual."

"I'm bored with being a prince," he declared. "I think I'll quit."

The house proceeded to explode.
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year_sevenGlowing Halo
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Posted on:
nov. 8, 2009 - 13 14

Here are some from mine, which probably aren't worth snagging, but I'm procrastinating on an English essay right now.
These make sense in the context of my novel, but not so much out of it. Well, some of them do...the others are just plain odd.

“Teacup has been missing her.”

He looked like an Abercrombie model who actually liked wearing shirts.

"Science finally discovered a way for humans to grow another hand."

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Si hoc legere scis nimium eruditionis habes.

2007: Roommates (Won!)
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thellama73

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Posted on:
nov. 8, 2009 - 15 52

I already posted this in the "Worst Sentence So Far" thread, but I think it bears repeating.

"He did not see that he was any better off for having tasted himself, so he decided to move on to other activities."

tracieallison

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Posted on:
nov. 9, 2009 - 09 45

My sentence:

I mean, Heckuvajob Brownie is definitely bizarre, but a normal America in the 2000s kind of bizarre; it’s a nice change.

Also I love the Abercrombie sentence.

mattkinsiGlowing Halo

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nov. 9, 2009 - 10 08

Good luck anybody using this mountain of crap.

I'm claiming this as one sentence:

Quote:
Time we were stuck in traffic for 2 hours because of the overturned chicken truck. Chickens everywhere. Cops chasing chickens. Hysterical.

Thats a true story.

Quote:
. I have the money to go get all dragged out, get the heels, dress, gigantic wig, the whole nine yards.

Quote:
“Probably. You are meaner than hell fire after all.”

Those are just from chapter 1.

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jinglewig1

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Posted on:
nov. 18, 2009 - 19 39

I guess they just didn’t want to think of have to think of any better name, do you?

and a more recent one:

I blew a dart at her Corvette tires and she now has a flat.

citizenmike9

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Posted on:
nov. 19, 2009 - 06 21

Adam remembered a painting of Huckleberry Finn laying back on a raft with Frog of "Frog and Toad" steering with a large stick and one of Alice and the rest of the Mad Hatter’s tea party from “Alice in Wonderland” taking tea with Clifford, the big red dog.

TheGreatGonzo26

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Posted on:
nov. 22, 2009 - 09 18

Here's one I recently came up with:
"Good lord Richie, when I said ‘Bring home a nice girl’, I didn’t mean at this ungodly hour of the night."

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