Portrait de LauraH213

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LauraH213
Novel: Cat Scratch (thanks to Ryan who is doing Nano too for the name)
Genre: Other Genres
50,252 words so far   Winner!

About LauraH213

Location: Las Vegas

Home Region:
United States :: Nevada :: Las Vegas

Age:33

Website: http://myspace.com/little_laura213

Favorite writers: JK Rowling, Poppy Z. Brite, Laurel K Hamilton, Stephen King

Favorite music: 80's

Non-noveling interests: hanging w/ friends, interneting

Joined date: octobre 25, 2006

Years done NaNoWriMo:
'06

NaNoWriMo posts: 123

NaNoWriMo buddies: 7

 


Cat Scratch (thanks to Ryan who is doing Nano too for the name)
an excerpt

Friday, May 13, 2006

As the sun blistered the desert air, she felt the warmth pulling her in, causing her to be even sleepier then normal. With each breath, as she laid on her chase lounge, she could feel her heart slowing down. Even though she knew something was wrong with her, she honestly could not make herself care. She finally could admit to herself that she is done with the lies, the backstabbing, and the silly fights that just cause more drama. She wondered how her friends could still act like they were in high school. Slow she shakes her head, almost laughing, thinking to herself, “High school no, more like junior high school.”
With one last breath, her heart stops. Her body lays there on her chase lounge chair for hours, not moving. Since most people on vacation do not pay attention to the others around them, nobody seems to notice a dead body laying there.
Finally after about three hours, a woman who had been walking back and forth by her chair stops to check out the “asleep” woman.
“AHHHH…..” the woman screams out as she touches the body which is still, even a bit too cold for the hot spring air.
Security comes running, their shirts stating “The Mediterranean Hotel and Security, Las Vegas, Nevada.” They push the screaming woman out of the way to find out what was wrong. They find the woman on the chair dead. Her light brown hair blowing in the late afternoon desert breeze. As the security staff realizes she is dead, the pull out her wallet and find out her name is Buni Johnson.

The killer stands just outside of the crowd forming, watching the chaos forming around Buni, to themselves, the killer thinks, “I stand here watching the security running round, trying to figure out what happened to Buni. To bad they won’t figure out, at least for a while that it was me, who killed her. I can’t believe how easy it was to get rid of her. It will make everyone who she ever hurt feel better. I know she hurt my friends and myself before and now the world is freed of her and the way she treated others. I only wish it could have been more painful, oh well the next one will be more painful. And each one after that one will get more painful for them and more fun for me.”

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