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The Barenaked Critic
Novel: Secrets of the Black Moon
Genre: Science Fiction
33,016 words so far  

About The Barenaked Critic

Location: Tulsa, Oklahoma

Home Region:
USA :: Oklahoma :: Tulsa

Age:25

Website: http://barenakedcritic.wordpress.com

Favorite novels: The Dark Tower series, Harry Potter, "When the Wind Blows," "Ender's Game," the Earthsea Trilogy

Favorite writers: Stephen King, Nora Roberts, Issac Asimov, Ursula K. Le Guin, J.K. Rowling, Orson Scott Card, Tamora Pierce

Favorite music: Movie scores

Non-noveling interests: Movies, video games, tea, amaretto sours, red wine, webcomics, my cat, cooking, camping, hiking

Joined: octobre 29, 2006

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'06 '08

NaNoWriMo posts: 180

NaNoWriMo buddies: 10

 

Brief Author Bio:

I was a senior in college when I landed in the Writing the Novel class, one of the last required classes for a major in professional writing. Most PW students took Writing the Novel, because it made putting together your portfolio for the capstone so much easier.

The first week, though, we learned what would be expected of us: we'd have to write 50,000 words (200 pages) in 3 months. That was our grade.

Writing has never been as hard for me as it was that fall. Nothing seemed to come out right. Writing each page felt as though I were wringing blood from a stone. When I finally finished, I swore that I would never put myself under that kind of pressure again.

Fast forward one year. It's late October 2006, and I was talking to my friend Chelsie online. She said that she was doing National Novel Writing Month. I'd heard of it, but 50,000 words in 30 days sounded like madness. And Chelsie wanted me to do it with her.

Considering I lived in a tiny town and all my friends had moved away, I had little else to do but work. A full novel in 30 days sounded like a tall order, but what the hey? Due to her urging, I signed up for NaNoWriMo two days before the contest started, with only a vague clue about what I'd write.

The first few days of writing were particular torture. Getting started felt agonizing, and I just couldn't get more than a few hundred words on the page. Frustrated, I packed up my computer and drove 30 minutes to the nearest bookstore. I parked myself in the cafe, ordered some hot tea, and turned on my music. My goal? To hit 12,500 words before I went home.

By the time I finished for the day, I'd hit 14,196. I wrote for four hours straight that evening, stopping only because the store was 30 minutes from closing and I had to drive back home. To say that I was a little ecstatic is the understatement of the century. I was writing again. And for the first time in a long time, I was thrilled about it.

So here I am, starting yet another year of NaNoWriMo. It feels weird, now, to skip the craziness of trying to knock out 50,000 words in one month. It may drive me madder than Captain Ahab, but I always enjoy the ride.

Good luck to everybody, and happy writing.

Synopsis: Secrets of the Black Moon

Two thousand years ago, the Vindari abandoned the Black Moon and settled across the galaxy, wiping all record of their home planet from existence. Only one being, the Librarian -- the telepathic Vindari born once a generation -- is entrusted with the secret knowledge.

Now, the newest Librarian -- VaRee -- flees across the galaxy. Her people have been obliterated, and the vicious El-dal are right on her heels. Her frantic flight leads her to the Excavator, a human mining ship settled at the far reaches of explored space.

Akiko Turner is a mechanic on the Excavator, chained in indentured servitude until she and her sister, Hoshiko, pay off their parents' debt.

But when an alien spacecraft crashes into the Excavator, Aki finds herself entrusted with a secret that could change the balance of power in the galaxy. Can she and her friends help VaRee and discover the secret of the Black Moon, or will the El-dal pirates find them first?

Excerpt: Secrets of the Black Moon

The El-dal ship was right behind her.

VaRee traced her fingers over the computer screen, bringing the pirate ship into sharper focus on the viewer before her. In subspace, they were evenly matched, and considering they had a full crew with a seasoned pilot, and she was a Vindari who'd never set foot behind the helm of a spaceship. The most she knew about flying a spaceship, she knew from her Guardian, TeLar, who had given her only the most basic instructions as they'd raced through the winding tree-tunnels of their city, before the El-dal's laser had sliced through TeLar's back.

She pressed her trembling fingers to her eyes to staunch the tears that threatened. She was the Librarian, the keeper of all the Vindari history: all their knowledge, all their secrets. Her survival was paramount, more so than any of her kin. She had to get to Zutara, the second of the two planets on this side of the galaxy that the Vindari called home.

What were the coordinates that TeLar had given her? In her fright, VaRee simply could not remember.

On the viewscreen before her, the El-dal ship grew larger, an ominous figure in the blackness of space.

They'd killed everyone. Her mother and father, her sisters, her friends...TeLar. All of them, gone. She was the only one left.

VaRee wrapped her arms around herself, trying to contain the pain that blossomed throughout her chest, the ache for those long gone. She'd felt them, each one. Felt their pain, felt it when the light of their spirits vanished from the mortal realm.

TeLar, TeLar, TeLar... Her mind and heart called for him in unison, but he was gone. The Guardian, chosen to protect her at all costs. She'd never expected him to fall this soon. His death, for he had been right beside her, had been the hardest for her to bear.

She had to remember the coordinates!

Suddenly, static crackled over the intercoms of her transport ship, and she heard the gruff breathing of the El-dal captain.

"You can't outrun us, Librarian," he said, and the onboard translator automatically rendered the words in VaRee's native tongue. "Surrender now, and yours will be a painless imprisonment."

Fury spiked within her at the voices of the murderers. Goddess curse them all for the destruction they'd wrought upon the Vindari! They were peaceful, and sought no quarrel with anyone.

"We know you know the coordinates of the Black Moon," the voice said silkily. "Give them to us. You have nowhere to run. We'll track you down, no matter where you try to go."

VaRee swallowed the lump of helpless rage in her throat. She had one place to run. One place to go. And one trick in her arsenal that they would never expect.

She tapped the computer and brought up the screen to input the coordinates. She wasn't sure if she was getting them right, but she was too angry to care. TeLar's death would not be in vain, not if she had anything to say about it.

VaRee opened up a hailing frequency, and held one blue finger poised over the engine button. She waited until the El-dal ship was almost within tractor range. She could sense their joy and excitement in the victory they felt was close at hand.

Then she spoke.

"May you, your children, and your children's children be cursed for the horrors which you have committed today. May the galaxy know you as the cowardly scum you are. And may your every goal remain forever out of your reach."

With that, she punched the button.

And went careening into hyperspace, where the El-dal could not follow.

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