Genre: Other Genres
About KlairBreenLocation: Colorado Home Region: Age:13 Favorite novels: Hm. I don't really know. I ussually just read whatever I feel like at the time. I finished the Inkheart trilogy and the Twilight series . . . so I'm not actually reading anything right now. Favorite writers: Stephanie Meyer writes really well, but I'm so sick of Twilight, and I could barely get through a chapter of Host . . . but I do like Jane Austin, Cornelia Funke is pretty good, but writes about writing so much it gets really, really, boring. Favorite music: Despite comments from my sister on listening to music with lyrics being bad for writing, I love to listen to Panic! At The Disco, The Goo Goo Dolls, Hinder, Relient K, Five for Fighting, Jason Marz, Reel Big Fish, Simple Plan, Chris Daughtry, Taylor Swift, Jordin Sparks, The Click Five, Coldplay, I Hate Kate, Snow Patrol, Nick Lachey, and The All-American Rejects. Non-noveling interests: I love acting, singing, being with my friends, and I guess playing the piano is okay too. |
Joined: octobre 8, 2008 This Year: Official Participant NaNoWriMo History: NaNoWriMo posts: 17 NaNoWriMo buddies: 24
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Brief Author Bio: I am lame. I won NaNoWriMo this year!!! But I am lame. I am less than halfway done with Cream Soda and Champagne. Probably more like a fourth of the way done...It's sad really. |
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Synopsis: Cream Soda and Champagne
Cream Soda and Champagne is a story I started thinking of a long time ago. It started out as a really weird dream. Then I started daydreaming about it during class and baby-sitting jobs.
I spent most nights lying awake in bed thinking about this story. I went over different versions of it a million times in my head. I had the same characters through it all and the same basic plot, but the ending was the thing I could never imagine right.
I feel bad for my little sister, who shares a room with me, because I never shut up about Cream Soda and Champagne anymore. We share a bunk bed, and I talk about it constantly (yes, I am a horrible person)…but I do make her fall asleep with my boring rants about it, so I am not such a horrible person after all!
I started bringing it up in dinner conversations with my parents and siblings. My older sister, the 'writer' of my family, said the story was weak but wanted to buy the title from me. So, of course, I figured at least the name was on the right track.
I continued lying awake trying to figure this out. That is to say, I have not slept a night in about a month that I haven’t thought about the story. Just last night I had to get up about five times to write down these tiny, little epiphanies. “Oh, he should say this! And then they go and get her, and she says,” blah, blah, blah! I might be going crazy, because my characters, not allowed out until November are being force to talk only to me…and they won’t shut up!
Then, when reading something Stephanie Meyer wrote on her website, I made a promise to myself. I wasn't going to write for everybody else anymore, I was going to write for me.
And that’s really what got me pumped! I’ve been getting no sleep, and thinking about the story all the time! (When I say that, it really isn’t an exaggeration.)
And now this summary is almost long enough to be a novel and you haven't learned anything about the plot yet...oh well.
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Cream Soda and Champagne is the story of two vastly different worlds, which collide. First we have the Brooks family; Mr. Oliver Brooks, the wealthy owner of the Brooks manor and estate in Derbyshire, England, his wife Emma, and son Charles. Charles, having been born with a silver spoon in his mouth (metaphorically), goes to a high-class boarding school (Dewwick) and is planning to go to the south of France for the summer holiday.
And then we have the Flints; James, a high school Chemistry teacher in Edison, California, and his daughter Bailey. Bailey, on the other hand, works in a pretzel stand in a mall food court on her free afternoons. And looking for a different job, and sleeping late in the mobile home her dad and she live in, is all Bailey has planned for the whole summer.
But neither of these dreams are meant to be, because shortly after school is over, in Dewwick and Edison, Bailey and Charles are informed by their parents that they have 'business' matters to fulfill.
So, yeah you guessed it, Bailey and James jump a plane to Derbyshire where Charles and Bailey...well, not to spoil anything...but let's just say neither are going to have a very peaceful summer.
OF COURSE, that's just half of it...
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"Business?" I asked. Noticing how he hesitated on the word. Some emotion flashed across his face, but was gone before I could identify it. "What kind of 'business'?"
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Okay, okay. Last thing. I just really have to point out that my story of how I thought of Cream Soda and Champagne is longer than the summary of the story! Whoa this is kind of sad...but whatever.
Excerpt: Cream Soda and Champagne
~Bailey~
I skipped around the boy’s toys, which were all over the floor. I guess when you make a living cleaning other people messes; you don’t even care about your own. I opened the door.
A boy with chestnut hair, and really deep brown eyes, stood there. “Oh, hello.” He stuttered a little.
“Do you have the right room?” I asked. He seemed like a nice person, but I was feeling particularly bitter towards males between the ages of 6-30.
He looked past me at Jane on the couch. Actually he didn’t look, he stared at her! Not in the annoying way Charles looks at people like he’s studying them under a microscope. I stepped out of the way, so he could see her better. I felt like I should apologize to him for greeting him like that.
Jane blushed under his gaze. Aw! This is adorable! (Did I just think the word adorable?) “Hi Oswald.” She smiled. Whoa, she really likes him doesn’t she? Wait, his name is Oswald?
He smiled nervously. “Sorry…I didn’t know you were baby-sitting. I’ll-I’ll just come back latter, I guess.” He looked at me suspiciously. I don’t really think that was fair.
Just because the Brooks had invited us, didn’t make me one of them.
A mental picture of me, in a wedding dress holding Charles, in a tuxedo, by the hand, over a church alter flashed before my eyes.
I shuddered. I wanted to wash my brain out with bleach! That was an abomination against reality and nature!
“Ew! Bad! No! Wrong! Oh sick! Gross! No!” I yelled, hitting my head with my fist.
I heard Charles’s voice in my head ask in a mocking tone, "Will you marry me?"
“No! No! Shut up!”
I really didn’t mean to say that out loud. Jane and Oswald stared at me. “Okay then.” Jane looked around nervously.
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