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Rüssell Brüllenfaust
Novel: A Forest and a Desert
Genre: Fantasy
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About Rüssell Brüllenfaust

Location: Southern California

Age:21

Favorite novels: The Dark Tower seires, Lonesome Dove, Watchmen

Favorite writers: Stephen King, Larry McMurtry

Favorite music: Ennio Morricone is the standard for epic, inspirational music; metal is great for fight scenes

Non-noveling interests: art, animation

Joined: octobre 9, 2008

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Synopsis: A Forest and a Desert

Jai and Xao, two cultural icons of a martial arts monastery, have had their entire lives planned around their inevitable meeting. After twenty years of Xao learning many styles and Jai only one, the two must fill each other's gaps to see which will turn out the superior and be granted special training at the mountain peak. The training will be the easy part; putting aside jealousy, loneliness, and a pending rivalry will be the true gauge of which will remain the master and which will become the student.

On the other side of the world, The Coinmugg tavern recieves a new bouncer, allegedly assigned from a halfway house. After the other employees warm up to Khang, the beautiful young bartender, Rota, remains supicious, and begins conducting an investigation to see if the bouncer is really a patsy for a government agency trying to pin the Mugg for ties to the mafia. Meanwhile, Khang counter-investigates to see what else Rota isn't telling her coworkers.

Excerpt: A Forest and a Desert

Xao sat on the edge watching Jai go. Jai knew Xao was watching and Xao knew it. It looked like Jai was trying very hard to contain himself until he was out of Xao’s sight, which wouldn’t be for another few minutes. Xao sighed and layed back, resting his head on his hands and a foot on the other raised knee. He looked at the sky, found his dream there. His eyes closed and he saw the same clouds, below him, so far below him, and his face felt a kind of cold; not the chill of a bitter day or from rain, but the numbing, exciting cold of a constant of wind, beating his hair, shouting a loving eternal call into his ear, into his face, into his entire being. He pushed the very real image of the back seat of a car blasting down the coastal highway and replaced it with his fantasy image of no carriage seat below him, no roof on top or anything at all above, no obstructions, no intrusions, no path or destination. He saw himself fly, passing over mountain ranges and deserts in an instant. The shout of the wind was the only sound and it went to his very core, inside his bones, inside his mio, inside his heart. He saw a break in the clouds and saw a world below him. He thought he saw his shadow crawling up and off the things of the world. He put his arms out and saw a change in the shadow, and suddenly it was a shadow on blue, and he was over the sea. He looked back and saw the west coast, and Dedo Noga on the edge of the beach, a tower of black rock on the sand. He saw it grow smaller until the land was born on became a speck. He looked below and saw he was nearly on the water, his broken reflection shimmering and shifting, though smiling and content. He looked forward and saw the blackness said to be a chain of volcanos in the middle of the sea, the only thing isolating his continent. He shot up and was over it, narrowly avoiding a pillar of smoke. Ahead a line emerged and grew, a land, another land, which no one of his homeland had ever seen. He saw the West, and it was coming upon him. He was slowing down and could see the lush trees on the beach, and soon a figure, who didn’t seem to see him coming. This person had one foot in the water and was about to depart. Xao stopped flying. He was in front of the person.
His Mother’s eyes opened and looked at him.
Xao awoke before Jai, looking down on his current pupil like he expected more.
“How was the river?” Xao asked, squinting at the sun Jai neglected to block. Jai sighed and walked into the cave and closed the curtain on one of the chamber halls. Xao sat up and looked in the cave. He recalled days training in that hall with so many others. He could almost hear dozens of footsteps echoing off the dark blue walls, and voices on this cliff edge, maybe a miniature tournament in a circle of students and masters cheering or contemplating. He remembered very few times at this Viento-miu cave that wasn’t pleasant. And now the only sound was Jai’s frustration and Xao’s silent sympathy.
Xao looked to the clouds.

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