Portrait de Emmylou

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Emmylou
Novel: The Mechanical Woman
Genre: Fantasy
39,562 words so far  

About Emmylou

Location: Suffolk, England

Home Region:
Europe :: England :: Elsewhere

Age:21

Website: www.hennabyemma.moonfruit.com

Favorite novels: Harry Potter, Discworld, Pride and Prejudice, Mansfield Park, No 1 Ladies Detective Agency, The Tenant of Wildfell Hall, Sense and Sensibility, My Sister's Keeper, The Moving Finger, Dead Famous, Jeeves and Wooster, 19 Minutes, Little Dorrit, The Other Boleyn Girl..

Favorite writers: Terry Pratchett, Agatha Christie, Austen, JK Rowling, Ben Elton, Alexander McCall-Smith, Jodi Picoult, Dickens

Non-noveling interests: Reading, Psychology, Internet, Cross-Stitch, Henna Tattoos, Fanfic

Joined: octobre 4, 2004

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'04 '05 '06 '07 '08

NaNoWriMo posts: 119

NaNoWriMo buddies: 22

 

Brief Author Bio:

Hi,

This is my 6th attempt at Nano, I broke even last year, finally achieving more wins than losses (3 wins, 2 fails) and this year I intend to increase this margin.

Slight problems I might hit...I have NO ideas...my writing enthusiasm is at it's lowest ebb...and I'm bang in the middle of the second year of my degree...help!

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Synopsis: The Mechanical Woman

At the Great Exhibition in 1850 the greatest techological advancement of the century was introduced to the Empire; the mechanical woman.

She sat on a specially made throne and answered complex mathematical equasions, could recite any book she was shown after one reading; and was hailed as the jewell in the crown of British technology.

Adventurous, unhappy Noelle Croft, aged 17, was there and was amazed along with everyone else. She never guessed the truth - that there was no mechanical woman. That the woman in the throne was a woman of flesh and blood - a genius, but a very human one.

So when an airship appears on the family lawn three years later, piloted by Lady Endicott, the Mechanical Woman herself, no one is more surprised than Noelle. When she learns the truth - that the scientific community was the victim of an elaborate con in order to allow Lady Endicott influence over scientific research that as a mere woman she could have no access to - Noelle realises she must help this woman.

Because Lady Endicott is on the run - she and her husband could hide her humanity from the scientists - but even they couldn't hide a pregnancy. So she has escaped the labratory in an airship of her own invention and plans to hide out until the birth. Her husband is not so lucky - he stands accused of treason for 'passing the only working mechanical woman to foreign powers'. Even if she returned, he would be in trouble for faking such an achievement. There is little hope for her husband - unless she can invent a real mechanical woman in exchange for him.

So she has chosen four notible young women to accompany her - who have all been recognised for their achievements in such a male society. Noelle (in the papers after fending off burglars from the family home single-handedly), Felicity (the daughter of a surgeon and who became noted for aiding him and learning how to perform procedures herself), Mabel (a maid who was accidentally discovered to have an IQ of 168), and Aimee (a Lord's daughter who has become reknowned for her inventions and technological ability).

As they plan to build a real mechanical woman, rescue Lord Endicott, and help Lady Endicott give birth, all within six months, what they don't know is that Lady Endicott has a plan she never mentioned; to inspire this small group into becomming the start of a new generation of equal, educated, and inventive women who will change British history forever.

Excerpt: The Mechanical Woman

“I hope the exhibition did not bore you,” he said as they headed towards the next. “I can not imagine metalwork to be an exciting thing for young ladies.”

Noelle cocked her head to one side to consider her reply. “I did not find it boring in the least. I’m sure many women would find it interesting given the opportunity to experience and learn about it.”

William was equally as thoughtful in his reply. “You believe that men and women could have similar interests if brought up to learn about them equally? Women might become skilled builders and engineers and men could enjoy working as seamstress and...” he tailed off, whether because he worried of offending her or because he could not think of another feminine task she did not know.

“There are male tailors,” she replied lightly. “And yes...I think that women and men could be raised to do work associated with the opposite sex. Although,” she smiled indulgently, “I accept that there will always be male interest in engines and female interest in dresses as quirks of our sexes.”

They shared a smile. “You are a modern woman,” said William, “and I enjoy talking to you.”

She was briefly taken aback at his seriousness, she had not expected him to be so thoughtful. In truth, she had expected him to be amused by her statement. She opened her mouth to reply, but was cut short by young John.

“Oooh!” said John at a level that could only be described as a shout. “Let’s go in that one!”

The display that had caught John’s eye was entitled ‘The Mechanical Woman’, and Noelle remembered it from the articles she had read about the Great Exhibition. She had little idea of what it involved – other than that the paper had described it as ‘the most incredible invention in human history – something that will change the face of humanity forever’. This was definitely not something to be missed.

“The Mechanical Woman,” read William. “Perhaps you are right,” he said to her, “women and mechanics do mix after all.”

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