Genre: Science Fiction
About Phoenix1Location: Folsom, CA Home Region: Age:47 Website: http://web.me.com/phoenixmark/Site/Welcome.html Favorite novels: The Curse of Chalion, Ender's Game, A Song of Ice and Fire, Lord of the Rings, Conan Favorite writers: Lois McMaster Bujold, Orson Scott Card, George R.R. Martin, J.R.R. Tolkein, Robert E. Howard Favorite music: Movie Soundtracks - randomized on the iPod! Non-noveling interests: Teaching, Reading, Audiobooks, RPGs, SCA |
Joined: octobre 5, 2005 This Year: Official Participant NaNoWriMo History: NaNoWriMo posts: 3 NaNoWriMo buddies: 4
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Brief Author Bio: I hold a degree in Theatre Arts from CSUS. I am currently seeking employment, a rough task as NaNo approaches. I hope to secure part-time employment to supplement my writing as I continue my work on the drafts of my existing novels, Return to Turtle Cove (my 2005 NaNo winner) and Apprentice Bound (my 2006 non-winner but 2007 winner). I am still, at 60,000+ words, only about a third finished with AB... And I am starting a third novel with 2008's NaNoWriMo. One day, I WILL finish one of these... in fact, all three and the few more I have swirling around in my melon. |
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Synopsis: No Name Stranger
He is a man with no name, no memory of his past. Waking up naked on a grassy wooded California valley, with no understandable clues to his past can put even the coolest of men in a panic. Not to mention having to learn to survive in a near lawless frontier, during a gold rush, and dealing with greed, hatred, lust and the other poorer aspects of humanity. He is taken in by a kindly family, and given provision and stability... Until he begins discovering things, strange and uncanny things, about himself. Things that set him apart from other folks, and send him away, across California, seeking answers. And fleeing from an unknown enemy, known only as Goldtooth.
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Excerpt: No Name Stranger
The sun had been wide and high over Main Street, and Calvin had just dropped off his last delivery of the day for Mr. Pike at the General Store. Coming out of Polk’s Grain and Feed, Calvin was heading down the street to the Empire Saloon, looking for a well-earned drink. He fondled the silver dollar in his pocket, that day’s pay. Not twelve feet down the boardwalk, sitting on an empty whisky crate outside the Yuba Hotel, was Pruitt. With a length of piggin’ string, he was casually practicing roping his well-worn boots, which were propped up on the a hitching post, blocking passage down the boardwalk. His cronies were idling behind and around him like cattle waiting for the feed bucket.
Calvin glanced around, noting the folks going about their business, taking note of the cart coming up the narrow dirt street, and thought about crossing the street, hopping down off the boardwalk and avoiding Pruitt altogether. He shook his head and set his jaw. Calvin Drake was no coward. He’d not be cowed into changing his plans to avoid the bully. He’d not run with the herd. Furthermore, giving in to Pruitt’s intimidation would only make it worse for the next time. So Calvin lifted his chin and held out his chest as he made to pass the bunch. His eyes narrowed and he looked right into Pruitt’s beady little eyes as he approached. There was menace in those eyes.
“Hey Rake!” Pruitt bellowed, his pencil mustache raising as the lip below it sneered.
The comment puzzled Calvin, not understanding Pruitt’s meaning, and he instinctively halted, more to ponder the meaning of the words than to engage in conversation. Conversing with the likes of Pruitt and his gang was like pissing into the wind. Wholly unsatisfying and a usually messy prospect.
Seeing the perplexed look on Calvin’s face, Pruitt’s sneer grew to a grin, his fish having nibbled on the line. Now, time to set the hook.
“That’s yer name… Rake!” called Pruitt, spitting out the last word with emphasis.
Mal Corwin guffawed, and the other four of Big Bull’s pack began the back slapping and chortling associated with an inside joke. Calvin could tell that they were as much in the dark as he was, and he was not going to give the overgrown lout the satisfaction of letting them get to him. He took a few more steps, intent on passing the gang, undaunted.
“Calvin Drake, skinny as a rake…” Pruitt jabbed in a sing-song voice.
Calvin halted again, rolling his eyes at the inane rhyme. Sure he was small, but Calvin could never be called skinny. “You think you’re clever, Bull? The big man knows how to make a rhyme…” The words escaped Calvin’s mouth before he had a chance to get reign on them.
It was too late. Calvin knew it. He had mouthed back to the biggest bully in the town of Nevada, and having ridden into that draw, he had no choice but to spur on and rely on his instincts to protect him. Noting that Pruitt’s little rope was currently looped over his boots, Calvin took the few remaining steps down the boardwalk to Pruitt, and causally pushed aside the big man’s legs and feet like they were one side of a hinged bat-wing saloon door, and moved right past. Pruitt’s feet clomped heavily to the rifted pine boards, and he toppled completely over onto his side. His feet got caught up in his own calf-tie lasso still wrapped around them, which had cinched up as he fell, the other end still tight in the bully’s grip. Pruitt’s goons stood there gape-mouthed as Calvin sauntered past, continuing his way down Main Street’s sloping planked walkway, as if he were the mayor himself.
It was then that Calvin remembered Pruitt’s revolver, that Colt Dragoon the big lout was always bragging on about. But Pruitt would never draw on an unarmed man, nor shoot a man in the back. Or Calvin hoped that was the case. And as he himself wore only a twelve inch Bowie knife on his hip, and not a gun, he reckoned he wouldn’t be seeing any lead flying his way. So he kept walking down the hill, head high, ignoring the barrage of insults from Pruitt and his gang. Keep on walking, he thought, into the saloon, and you’ll be safe enough.
The threat of “You’re a dead man, Drake!” rang from up the hill behind him. But Calvin had pushed aside the bat-wings and barely heard the pronouncement. He bellied up to the bar, slapped down a fat dollar piece and watched Old Keating pour a glass of the dark amber liquid before Pruitt and his boys burst into the place, calling him out. The silence was broken only by the rattling of dimes, change for the drink that the barkeep dropped onto the slick bar, which always gleamed like it was wet.
The shot of whisky went down hard, and left a burning trail all the way to his stomach.
“I said get yer scrawny ass outside, Drake. You got some apologizing to do.”
Calvin swallowed hard and turned to look at Pruitt and his gang. Big Bull Pruitt was grinding the knuckles of his right fist into his left palm. He was red-faced and scowling. Flanking him were Buford Briggs and James Reeding. Buford was an angular thug, and was thumping a hickory club against his palm. Reeding, who had an unnatural fascination with the savage red indian, was fondling the indian stag-handled knife he always wore, tied to his leg like a six-shooter. Behind them were the rest of the motley bunch, Hodges, Corwin and Masting, looking ominous. As ominous as they could, being grimy, sniveling lackeys of a dim-witted gang boss.
Looks like I’m pissing into the wind, like it or not, Calvin thought. The taste of whisky still on his tongue, he swallowed again, now settled that he was going to have it out with these louts, like it or not.
“I didn’t hear you say it,” Calvin said with a smirk raising the corner of his mouth. You wanna play games, lets go, he thought wryly.
A fog of confusion momentarily passed over Pruitt’s face. “Wha?” he muttered. “Say what?”
In a matter of fact tone that would make a tinhorn lawyer proud, Calvin continued, “You said,” he paused just long enough to further complicate matters, “that you said get yer scrawny ass outside. I said I didn’t hear you say that.”
Pruitt’s eyebrow became a ‘v.’ The bully blinked in bewilderment. “Well,” he said hesitantly, “er… I said it.” Heavy arms crossed his chest.
“Yes,” Calvin nodded, “you said you did!” His tone was syrupy and patronizing.
“I did say it,” Pruitt boomed. “You callin’ me a liar? Boy?” His expression was menacing and malicious, but Calvin seethed from the insult. Boy? he thought. Boy?Calvin wanted to lurch at that cow-face and turn it into bloody pulp. His fists were clenched and he crouched, as if he was going to pounce on the Bull.
“Now I don’t want no trouble in here from you fellas,” Old Keating muttered from behind the smooth dark-wood bar. As if on cue, the rest of the patrons scattered into corners, hustled past the bullies out the door, or retreated up the stairs.
Calming himself, Calvin straightened. “I mean no trouble here, sir,” he stated in his most innocent sounding voice. “I do believe it is Big Bull and his cows there what want the trouble. Sir.” He jerked his thumb toward the ill mannered group.
A lowering grumble, not unlike cattle noises, emanated from the gang. It was obvious that Calvin was making the situation worse, not better. He reprimanded himself, and chuckled in amusement at the knack he had for loading up trouble on top of trouble with that smart trap of his. Then he realized that his internalized laugh was taken by the gang as mockery in their direction. Just let me add another shovelful on the heap, he thought.
“If’en you don’t go outside on your own, Drake,” Pruitt demanded, “we’ll be happy to grab you and haul you out!” Hodges, the lean, full-bearded one added a “Thats right!” to his boss’s demand, which, to Calvin’s sensibiility, seemed ridiculous. What is it about the weak-minded that they fall into herds for support of one another?
Shaking his head in declination, Calvin said, “I have no mind to either walk out with you, nor be taken out by you. And further, I’ve no mind to be beaten to a pulp by you and your men once you get me out there.”
“Then we’ll just have to make pulp of you in here, Drake.” Pruitt’s fingers were now idly rubbing his pistol butt, and his nostrils were flaring in anger.
Behind him, Calvin heard the click-click of Old Keating’s double-barreled Parker lead-sprayer. Keating held the shotgun past Calvin’s shoulder, leveled at Pruitt and his boys, who had become suddenly still.
“As I said,” the barkeep said in an even tone, “I don’t want no trouble, and you fellers are about to cause some trouble.”
Pruitt puffed out his chest. “Just give us Drake here,” he said, the veneer of his bravado cracking a bit, “and there’ll be no trouble here.”
“I don’t care what ya do,” Old Keating said cooly, “as long as it happens outside the Empire. So here is what’s gonna happen. The lad here is gonna walk past you boys, unmolested, out the door. I’m gonna count to ten, then I’m gonna count to ten again. If the whoery lot of you ain’t outta here when I get to that second ten, I’m gonna have one helluva mess to clean up, if you get my drift.”
It took a jot for Pruitt and his lads to work out Keating’s plan, and by the time they had, the barkeep was counting “two” for the second time and Calvin was sprinting up Main Street. He had even taken time to snatch his change off the bar before sprinting past the bunch, the bat-wings flapping and creaking in his wake.
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