I thought it'd be a fun little thread to do a first line thing. Feel free to scold me if this has been done and I didn't see it. Anyway, I'll start.
"Chris looked at the bloody and lifeless body of Ivan Psikhushka and raised his$ hand to his brow."
Always start with violence.
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Nov 5, 2007 - 14 13
I’ve got used to getting up this early now.
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Always start with early mornings.
50,407 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 15 09
The writers have all left for a trip to the city, though for what I don’t know, as they don’t tell me these things, to them I’m merely the building’s security guard, but at least now I can roam through their rooms to examine their typewriters, these instruments of torture that knock my head around day and night.
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Ugh.
0 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 15 19
"Fuck."
I kid you not.
3,162 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 15 41
He was nice to me so I indulged him.
13,509 / 50,000
Nov 6, 2007 - 00 11
Waiting for a fight is the worst part.
2,439 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 15 58
"The first time Imogene went to a funeral was on accident. "
50,005 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 16 33
"He was sitting right next to me and he kept sniffing up the mucus that kept trying to trickle out of his nose. "
I typed the first thing that came into my head at midnight on the 1st. It doesn't get any better from there.
21,464 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 17 18
"I want to be bad. I can't wait to learn to be bad."
Theory: make the reader want to know what's coming.
50,346 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 17 50
"It was cold, everything was dark and I felt like I was floating sitting there without breathing."
Hey this is fun!!
65,882 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 17 55
Raziel watched as she walked away from her friends to another section of the ruins of Coventry Cathedral.
50,095 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 18 42
"The year was 1979."
Simple and sweet?
50,211 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 19 04
"I was sitting in a clean, white room."
(I think it might be a Hemingway reference.)
50,025 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 19 11
I'll play; part of this is learning to be less shy about my writing, eh?
Years had passed since that phone call.
Oh, so banal -- beginning was the hardest part, and after that the words began flowing, and it got better surprisingly quickly. So maybe I have a bit of affection for that simple opening line. I'll still gladly rework it in December. :)
41,011 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 19 20
“Stay a little longer, Kira,” Helene said, lifting the hotel-starched white sheet to expose her breasts.
10,178 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 19 26
"I'm not the kind of person who would be in a place like this at a time like this, but I can't seem to make it happen any other way so I leave the process alone."
now that i see it written out all alone like that, i'm worried it might be a little cliche.
oh well. i'll save that for EdMo
19,447 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 19 29
Sometimes, it wasn’t so difficult to wake up at five in the morning, especially when two golden retrievers climb up on top of your chest.
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I agree with whoever said that they always start with mornings. :D I kind of want to reword it, because I simply can't compare to all of you guys' sentences. Hah.
50,184 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 19 39
That last night I danced with her under star-caught trees, and the leaves swirled in a grey green ocean under our feet and whispered to us of the immeasurable sadness of love.
21,585 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 19 46
"The air inside the Thunderbird Club smelled of cheap mustard and expensive failure."
5,826 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 19 53
"The fuck is a doorbuster?"
Rebecca Stone would always remember those as her husband’s last words.
72,973 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 20 18
"Phil left home because his wife's chihuahua bitch bit him."
50,002 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 20 18
I should probably start with Abby, since I wouldn't have met Tamara at all if it wasn't for him.
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My character is just as befuddled about telling stories as I am, and after all this crazy business has happened, she's trying to trace it all back to where it started. And it started when she met her future husband, which happened to be her last night at work and the last night she recognized her life.
65,882 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 20 37
LOVE it!!!! That image is awesome!!
52,241 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 20 41
"It was raining the day we buried our mother."
I don't know if I like it, but what the hell, it's a rough draft, right?
50,081 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 21 00
I LOVE this one!!! You rawk!
50,081 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 21 02
Oh, Yummy!
55,892 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 21 10
It was a dark and stormy night.
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Really. My main character is walking back to her little house on the edge of town after coming home from her first year performing with the vegetarian lesbian circus, and she's walking home in a rainstorm.
50,077 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 21 16
Haha, I just realized I mistyped my first sentence. I can't believe I didn't notice until now! Here it is:
"I like waking up in the morning."
I actually meant to write "I like waking up early in the morning." But that's more interesting, lol. I certainly wouldn't like to not wake up in the morning.
By the way, how did you guys come up with your first sentences? Did you think about it before you started writing, or was it just the first random thing that came out when you sat down to write it? I was thinking about what I should start with before I started writing, but then I gave up on that and just went with freewriting, and that's what came to mind at the time.
50,158 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 22 10
"A lone blackbird wandered among the sands, leaving behind it a trail of splayed footprints."
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It was one of those "Start at midnight with no idea how I'm starting" beginnings. :D
I like to start with what seems like an unimportant detail, go to what seems like an entirely different story for the whole novel, and throughout the whole story build up until, at the very end, in the very last lines, I repost that first paragraph and the reader goes, "OH. ... OH, I GET IT!"
11,895 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 22 11
Acceleration due to gravity in a free-fall is thirty-two feet per second per second.
4,000 / 50,000
Nov 5, 2007 - 22 21
"Who ARE you?"
Might as well play the black pieces, right? Give THEM the first move!