| Dragon_Master | Last Sentence |
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Nov 2, 2009 - 20 16 |
I remember last year a very fun topic (I can't remember who started it) was the Last Sentence topic, where you posted your last sentence before you took a break! :D So I decided to start it this year. Here we go! Last sentence before a snack raid break: The noise was disgusting. |
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33,891 / 50,000
Nov 2, 2009 - 20 25
Here it is:
It is kind of like gravity between two bodies but in a much more intuitive sense.
35,019 / 50,000
Nov 2, 2009 - 20 31
Ten minutes later he had a plane ticket to Frankfurt.
I'm not sure if this will be the end of Chapter 4 or not.
----------40,012 / 50,000
Nov 2, 2009 - 20 42
“The big scandal this year is that the new math teacher—Jack, Joe, something like that—actually slept with a student. Can you believe it? What a perve.”
I love this game! Thanks for posting this!
36,714 / 50,000
Nov 2, 2009 - 22 00
This is mine:
“Thanks man.”
----------"He was now a devil without a cause."
38,353 / 50,000
Nov 2, 2009 - 22 12
Raj could just make out what looked like some buildings, but were obviously crypts.
yea! I was hoping we'd do this again this year.
39,117 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 00 02
A few looked at him solemnly, which was a good deal better then the looks of sad hatred they had given him before.
This should be interesting. =)
----------Meekrat Entertainment Group (My story from 2008 is somewhere on the site)
30,018 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 05 03
Oooh I do remember this thread. I like it, because it encourages you to leave off on some sort of cliffhanger. And we all know (or should know) nothing gets you back to the word processor like wanting to resolve a cliffhanger.
Last night, I wrote:
And if I miss, well, we can try again, right?
35,502 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 07 37
Hmm I'll have to come up with a better one for today's session. This is what I left off on last night.
He smiled at Tom and ushered him out the other door from the Balcony.
----------2006 A Hole in Andrellas (winner)
2007 Voyage of the Amadeus (32,111)
2008 Magic of the Highways (11,000)
2009 A Song of Psalms (in progress)
40,012 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 09 14
Is it bad that my first thought was, "Is she writing about a training camp for firing squads?" I think it is...
30,018 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 09 52
Haha!
Though - ahem - that's "he" :)
Here's my next final "sentence" which stretches the meaning of sentence well past the paragraph phase. Oh well, you need both, I think, for the drama to work.
So they had to improvise on their plan, and the only way they could see to do that was to slam the ship itself into the planet killing themselves - and the crew - in the process.
And so that was what they would do.
40,012 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 09 53
Oops--sorry, Yotto!
Last line from last night:
Okay, so maybe nice wasn't the right word to use.
48,212 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 14 40
Before a break for dinner...
She tried to recall what James had told her as she brought up an online search engine.
40,012 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 14 56
Euclid was already laying down, his crack whore-ishly thin body almost swallowed up in the thick blankets.
Ugh. The things NaNo does to my writing--I'm so incredulous that I actually write than sentence, I have to post it.
15,162 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 14 57
Ha, the last sentence I left off as sounds like a rape scene. (It's not- I promise!)
"Roe pulled the girl up into the caravan, grabbing some strips of cloth to tie her against the wall and on top of the makeshift bed, a pile of clothing covered with a few blankets."
At least this makes me want to continue to resolve the fact that it does sound like the start of a rape scene.
38,353 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 16 05
just after I hit 5000
"And anyway, it’ll be fact in the story and if Alex ever shows up, I’ll tell it."
38,353 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 16 08
sorry about the double post
36,714 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 17 13
I had to post this one cause it makes me laugh on the inside everytime I read it.
"Besides two women ahead of himself whom he thought had very nice backsides."
----------"He was now a devil without a cause."
36,714 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 17 17
Whoops double post.
----------"He was now a devil without a cause."
48,212 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 19 00
I'm so glad we got this topic rolling again this year~
She didn’t plan on killing James… She was just trying to understand what the hell he was.
40,012 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 20 18
He was desperate enough to get her alone that he was willing to hope for it.
OMG 3227 words in an hour my hands are going to fall out right about now.
36,714 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 20 53
My last one for tonight.
"Baron only thought of Alice falling down the rabbit hole as he was sucked into the darkness of the mirror falling through what seemed like everlasting darkness."
----------"He was now a devil without a cause."
39,117 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 21 09
Last one for tonight:
"He wondered if he would survive this as he felt himself drift away from consciousness."
----------Meekrat Entertainment Group (My story from 2008 is somewhere on the site)
48,212 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 21 35
My last one for the night too. Short and simple.
He groaned.
33,891 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 21 40
Crossing the 5k mark tonight...
"After which it was as if a silent sigh had gone up and the tension which was present a second ago vanished not to return again that night. "
38,353 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 21 59
*sigh* I really need to finish this section, but it's being very difficult, probably because it's a death scene...so...as I take a break...
The sick smell of blood warred with the smell of burning wood.
38,896 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 22 04
Time to go to bed!
"There was simply something about her that I could not explain, and all I knew was that it drew me to her."
----------"Keeping up the appearance of having all your marbles is hard work, but important." -Jacob Jankowski
2007 - Ms. Harper (won)
2008 - Perfectly Accidental (won)
2009 - as yet untitled
244,421 / 50,000
Nov 3, 2009 - 22 19
She fell asleep with the sheets twisted around her waist and her hair, silken and soft a mere hour ago, now drenched with sweat and passion.
5,159 / 50,000
Nov 4, 2009 - 00 07
My last sentence was the same twice: It was only a ball.
and my most recent one: He was intruding.
----------<~*Daniel James*~>
35,904 / 50,000
Nov 4, 2009 - 02 44
End of my last session: "It was time to visit Father."
Not going to be a happy visit...
I haven't decided whether I want to start my next session now, or wait for this afternoon.
29,788 / 50,000
Nov 4, 2009 - 07 41
"No, but we've got to help our boy out. Here's the plan..."