Surviving Manila: Risen Threat (if anyone is interested in reading it)

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Nanowrimo 2009 Entry: Surviving Manila: Risen Threat

There were hundreds upon thousands of them, moving down the narrowing section of the Epifanio de los Santos Avenue as if in silent protest against the corrupt regime of a debilitated government. No banners were raised in this march of the masses this time however. No music-interwoven insults were chanted. No stage was raised at the foot of the massive metal madonna whose outstretched hands held immobile beams of concrete hope.

This was no revolution unfolding upon the main road known as EDSA.

It was well past the third hour of the afternoon and the sun hung closer towards the horizon. A comfortably chilly November such as this would typically be punctuated by the blare of car horns, the groan and rumble of privately-owned buses and the self-serving sirens of the escorted public officials whose cars (regardless of whom rode in them) were given priority and enforced passage through the traffic slowed streets. Instead, there was an ominous lingering silence. The uneasy peace of quiet blanketed the area was reminiscent of ghost towns and movie cities that had been ravaged by the hordes of the undead or the undiscriminating touch of plague.

And that was quite an apt comparison.

For indeed Manila was infected with plague.
A plague of the hungry and the walking dead.

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*O* ZOMBIES!!!!! <3 Haha. I will be following your story 8D

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Me likey. Don't forget the plants.

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Too bad they can't eat politicians. Zombies might find nothing safe to eat inside their heads.

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Oooh thank you!!!

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Pyrodinium wrote:
Too bad they can't eat politicians. Zombies might find nothing safe to eat inside their heads.

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Gah, you're getting ahead of me! But something tells me you will enjoy the third chapter. :-P

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Almira Torralba wrote:
Me likey. Don't forget the plants.

"Why should my opinion matter?"

I LOVE that game.
And yes, an easter egg reference to that game will be in the story.

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Updated.

Chapter three is online!

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Read it this afternoon! Great job! I want more zombie action though. Hahahaha! :3

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Woohoo! Zombies! As a sucker of zombie movies and Resident Evil, I love this!:D

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Zombie action is on its way!
Chapter Five: Katipuneros is now online!

An excerpt:

Ricardo disagreed, “What, they rose up from the dead sick and tired of all the corruption and instability that exists within the Philippine government? Are we supposed to expect these things to eventually gather at the foot of the EDSA shrine with the now marching bodies of the late Ninoy Aquino hand in hand with Jose Rizal? That’s kind of a sick thing to imagine, Nonito.”

Nonito shrugged.

“Seriously?” Ricardo could not contain his reaction. “You actually think the zombies are actually the K.K.K. brought back to life out of disgust of the ongoing events in our country? Zombies. Of our Nation’s heroes. Really now?”

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You're now in my follow list, garapata.

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Chapter 10 excerpt:

Chapter Nine: Presumptions

Operation: Purgatory led Captain Rodolfo and his companions on a dangerous trek in search for a biological weapon that seemed to defy all laws of science. Like something straight out of a horror movie, the biological weapon suggested the ability to transmute an ordinary healthy person into an infected carrier of a genetically enhanced mutagen overpowered with chemically induced rage and insatiable hunger, nullified pain receptors and a rapid state of cellular decomposition as the body sapped all stored energy to maintain an almost constant state of activity. While testing had suggested a much lower rate of complete inception of the virus, a large percentage of the remainder would find themselves still sharing the constant hunger and cellular degeneration without the boosts of destructive rage. Instead, the remainder would find their bodies in a rapid state of rot and decay while afflicted with an almost lucid state of dreaming. Though pain negation was constant in all tests, a large majority would find themselves struggling against a physical restraint similar to that of sleep paralysis. Even something as simple as walking or crawling would require much greater effort.

Their hearts would remain beating, rising at a rate as high as 210 beats per second. Their breathing would turn rapid, hyperventilating the body in a matter of seconds. And then, after an estimate period of 15 to 30 minutes depending on the health of the subject prior to infection, the body would crash, adrenaline dropping to immensely low levels and the heart almost imperceptible as it seemingly halts beating. Breathing grows more and more shallow as well until suddenly, a strange state of clam seemingly strikes and the subject can no longer be detected to be breathing. (An astute observer, however, would note that the subject now relies on breathing through the mouth taking in tremendously minute levels of oxygen almost like an animal in hibernation.

The subject would then remain capable of limited activity, typically related to the search or acquisition of living flesh or warm blood for consumption. Records noted a number of subjects lasting just a few minutes shy of 72 hours.

Rodolfo and his team sought not just evidence of this biological weapon, but also for any signs of a cure for those afflicted by it. For something that induced upon its victims a state of living death, Rodolfo had hoped the creators were human enough to consider creating something to counteract its effects had it infected someone of considerable importance to them. But in the ensuing years that passed, more and more the horror of the virus being considered as an ultimate strike with no turning back came into focus. It was like the group sought to make the whole world itself both the target and the attacker with a single act: the world’s population was to become suicide bombers with their blood itself the biological incendiary that would consume us all in a wave of viral fire.

Few believed them.

Few could accept the feasibility of such a biological weapon existing. Too quickly many high ranking officers scoffed at the idea that there was a zombie serum out there. Too many times the operation itself was nearly shut down due to the lack of actual hard evidence. Rodolfo tried to convince others of its validity, with the clearly abundant paper trail and the number of scientists they had either apprehended or killed who seem to have been given charge of a segment of the formula. But the idea that such a biological weapon could exist was too easily dismissed as preposterous. What was next, the officers would say in jest, a death ray? Killer robots who would be sent from the future?

To their credit, Rodolfo and his team kept a true bearing in their search for actual proof of the virus. They stalked the virus and its creators over the last few years with commendable skill. Their missions remained hidden in secrecy with neither media nor public rumor suggesting their existence. From the jungles of Mindanao to the winding roads of Indonesia, the secret back alleys of Hong kong to the quiet towns of Capiz, the missions eventually led them back towards Manila where supposedly an actual active batch of the biological weapon was being transferred from a private ship to a privately chartered plane. The team realized this was the first opportunity through the years to prove it was real and actually get their hands on a sample.

What they did not anticipate was that the information regarding its transit itself was a lie.

The virus was to be unleashed in Manila.

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