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xirene
Novel: The Wolf and the Unicorn
Genre: Other Genres
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About xirene

Location: Longmont, CO

Home Region:
United States :: Colorado :: Boulder

Age:40

Website: http://xirene.deviantart.com

Favorite writers: Tolkien, Rowling, Lackey, Baudino, Edghill

Favorite music: Anything instrumental. I can't listen to any voices when I am trying to write, except for the ones in my head. ;)

Non-noveling interests: Cat rescue, shopping, drawing/painting, ren faires, Wicca, World of Warcraft

Joined date: Oktober 1, 2006

NaNoWriMo posts: 31

NaNoWriMo buddies: 2

 


The Wolf and the Unicorn
an excerpt

His body was paralyzed by the stake, but Beckett's mind raced, trying to work out what the Hell the Ba'ali might have planned, and even more importantly, how to escape with his Unlife intact. No one knew where he was; that was par for the course, he knew, and no one would think twice about him going missing for a prolonged time. I'll find out what I can about whatever they've got going on here, and the moment this fucking shovel is out of me, I'll run like Hell. Not much of a plan, he acknowledged ruefully, but just about the only one he had available.

Unfortunately, it was a plan that didn’t hold much chance of success.

The one who'd staked him seemed to be in charge. At his command, one of the newcomers reached over and grasped the shovel handle, snapping the wood in half. The piece that impaled the Gangrel's heart shifted, causing a spasm of pain that he could not react to counter. The two Ba'ali hoisted him and carried him down the passage and through a series of turn-offs and doorways; he tried to memorize the route, but was soon hopelessly disoriented. Finally, they entered a torch-lit room and he was dumped unceremoniously onto a large piece of stone.

Beckett couldn’t turn his head to examine it closer, but had the distinctly unpleasant thought that it could very well be an altar of some sort. Knowing the Ba'ali's reputation, he didn’t really want to think of what sort in particular.

His assailant moved into his field of view with a grin that would have made a Malkavian jealous. "So, I bet you're wondering why I've called us all together," he quipped, and laughed at his own bon mot. He ran a hand through his thick brown curls and winked. "Well. You may or may not have heard the rumors about how the Tremere created gargoyles. They experimented on dogs like you, with the occasional Tzimisce and Brujah thrown in for good measure." He reached off to the side, and when his hand came back into Beckett's vision, it was holding a scalpel. "We're going to outdo the Sorcerers' wildest dreams."

He slashed down towards the Gangrel's chest, and cut open his shirt in one fluid movement, the tip of the scalpel slicing through fabric and somehow only grazing the skin. The Ba'ali smiled again, and muttered something under his breath that sounded disturbingly like an incantation. He raised the knife again, the metal glimmering in the torchlight, and brought it down with deliberate precision.

The blade bit into Beckett's flesh; he could not move to avoid it, nor could he scream in agony when his tormentor produced a small, smoking flask of some vile neon-green liquid and poured it over the incisions. It burned worse than acid, worse than sunlight, and he was powerless to do a god damned thing about it. Another line was traced with the scalpel, and was followed again by the excruciating fire of the Ba'ali's potion; he howled mutely within the confines of his mind. Another, and another…some remote corner of Beckett's mind realized there was a pattern being carved into his flesh, something alarmingly like a sigil. Two of the lines met with another cut of the knife, and when they joined, the pain seared into his soul. He hadn’t thought things could get worse, but he'd evidently, and rather unfortunately, been wrong.

How long does it take for a man to go insane from torture?

The Ba'ali raised the scalpel again, this time leaning towards Beckett's face.

God damn it, MOVE! His body refused to cooperate, despite his mind's fervent orders.

An unholy glee lit the Ba'ali's eyes as he lowered the blade slowly and deliberately, savoring his captive's pain. "Oh yes, we will outdo the Tremere quite splendidly, my friend."

Beckett braced himself as best he could for the bite of steel into his flesh once more, but it never came. Instead, the Ba'ali's head appeared to part company from his shoulders, and the headless body fell forward onto him, dark blood pumping from the severed vessels of the neck for several pulses before the corpse dissolved into ash.

"Damn you, Yeqon. I got you that time, you bastard." Another visage appeared in his field of vision; a grim-faced woman, spattered in gore. "Hang on, this is gonna hurt," she warned him as she grasped the remains of the shovel-handle with both hands and pulled hard.

A spasm of pain racked his body as the stake pulled free, and he doubled over, clutching his chest. She grasped his chin and turned his face to hers. "I need you to stay here. He wasn't alone, and I'll be damned if any of these bastards get away." At her touch, a blissful numbness spread throughout Beckett's body along with a sudden inability to move. Despite the paralysis, he was not about to complain; given what he'd endured, he was in no hurry to meet the Ba'ali again anytime soon.

She picked up the curved sword she'd set aside to free him and stalked off into the darkness, leaving Beckett alone.

The tunnel was dark, but that was no barrier to finding her quarry. She'd amplified her senses using one of the Gifts of her bloodline, and could sense the two Ba'ali not far ahead.

Only two…and neither of them were Rahab, damn it. She didn't need any sensory enhancements to tell whether he was near. Blood calls to Blood, no matter how sundered or sullied, she mused wryly. She moved as silently as only one of Caine's childer could, and soon she saw the pair with her eyes as well as her other senses.

Dumah and Pinem'e; not much of a challenge, but certainly worth sending to their Final Deaths. Every Ba'ali that I turn to ash is a gift to the childer of Caine and Seth alike.

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