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I had no idea what to write about and this was a timed free write and Ms Holyoak always looks so demanding from her class under stress situations so I looked out the window.

“Once upon a time there was a boy being picked up by his mother out in front of the school . . .”

Too stupid. Hmmmm.

“ The strawberry appearance of the small frisky squirrel in the huge tree was suprisingly funny to the small girl . . .”

No. To adjectivy. Hmmm.

The grass was shimmering like dead wheat in the fall, but still it seemed symbolic for the winter to come. . . .”

God no.