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jacksgirl
Novel: not sure yet
Genre: Romance
50,064 words so far   Winner!

About jacksgirl

Location: Kentucky

Age:41

Favorite novels: one of mine LOL

Favorite writers: Christian Romance, Louis Lamour, Robert Parker, Tony Hillerman

Favorite music: Toby Keith, Kenny Chensney, Billy Ray Cyrus, George Start Steve Earle

Non-noveling interests: Trucking, Animals, Ham radio, Photography, Singing, Muisc, Nascar,

Joined date: Oktober 21, 2007

NaNoWriMo posts: 9

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not sure yet
an excerpt

Remember this is a rough draft

Everything was right where it needed to be, there was cars and men at the front and the back of the house and As soon as Austin pulled up Reno was ready to give the order. Austin looked around at the house and shook his head.

“Something just doesn’t feel right here. Are we sure we have the right place.”

“Yes this is the correct address and the right part of town and there is a party going on here.” Reno said as he looked out into the street. There were plenty of rich looking cars lining the street and he was going to enjoy putting some of these posh rich boys into their place.

“Is it a go Austin?” Reno asked but there was no quick answer and finally he heard.

“I’m not sure. … Something isn’t right?”

“We don’t have time for your second guessing Austin … is the paper work in order?”
“Yes the paper work is in order… “ Austin said as he looked at the address. “But this place. I’m just not sure… “ Was the last thing he said as he jumped out of the car and went heading toward the door at the signal of Reno’s call on the radio.

“It’s a go.”

They all went running toward the house past the cars and to the front door. Two men were ready to pound on the door when it came open and a woman stood there eyes wide from fright. She was about to say something when she moved back quickly letting the men pass by her.

She was not sure what was going on but she knew to get out of the way quickly and she moved back with her hands up in the air. Reno knew that something was wrong too when he looked around the room and he immediately began to call on his radio.

“Stand down … immediately stand down.”

Austin walked in with the subpoena in hand and showed it to a angry looking man that was holding his hand out. Reno was the fast talker in this bunch so Austin stepped back and began to move the men out of the house with quick orders on his radio and with his hands. Soon they were all out of the house but a few men and Reno.

Austin was back in his unmarked car very angry and wanting to break something. What had went wrong he was sure that the party was coming down at this address, there would be some explaining to do and he hoped that Reno’s silver tongue could get them out of this one.

There was no more subponea now and it would take a good hour to get another one if they found the correct address.

“That party has to be around here somewhere, she wasn’t lying I can feel it in my gut.”

“Wanna drive around and see what we can find.” The young driver said, and he was hoping the man would say yes because he wasn’t ready to go back to a boring desk job just yet.

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