Glowing Halo
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ammre
Genre: Literary Fiction
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About ammre

Location: The Garden State

Home Region:
United States :: New Jersey :: Central

Age:23

Website: http://www.ammre.org

Favorite novels: Kushiel Series, farenheight 451, all quiet ont he western front, the lais of marie de france, ruins of ambri

Favorite writers: jacqueline carey

Favorite music: Drumming, a la raquy and the cavemen

Non-noveling interests: body modification, sewing, burning man culture, SCA/Pennsic, middle eastern drumming, hula hooping

Joined date: Oktober 22, 2007

NaNoWriMo posts: 3

NaNoWriMo buddies: 6

 


I wanted to see her suffer. Just a little bit. I wanted to know.. How long until I could make her say please. I don't think I've heard that word from her in a long time. I figured I should loosen my grip on her throat if i ever wanted to hear it again, but I still kept my thumb firmly wedged up against her artery. By now she should be getting weak headed...
"David!" she gasped "Please!"
There it was. Shining in the room. I let her go and watched as she crumpled to the floor gasping and crying. I got my please.
"Why couldn't you have just said that before?"
The only answer she gave was the hurt look from her red swollen eyes. I climbed down and wrapped my arms around her. When she flinched at my touch it felt as if someone has just punched me in the chest, but instead of letting go i just held her, rocking back and forth and told her I loved her. I did love her. I just wanted her to say please.

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