Genre: Mainstream Fiction
About Carolyn BranchLocation: Fulton, Missouri Home Region: Age:61 Website: http://carolynsquestions.blogspot.com Favorite novels: Outlander series by Diana Gabaldon Favorite writers: Diana Gabaldon, Jodi Picoult Favorite music: NONE - I need quiet! Non-noveling interests: Genealogy, History, web design |
Joined: Oktober 5, 2005 This Year: Official Participant NaNoWriMo History: NaNoWriMo posts: 24 NaNoWriMo buddies: 16
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Brief Author Bio: I've been writing all my life, but I never finished a novel until November 2005 - my first NaNoWriMo. I'll always be grateful for the inspiration and PUSH my wonderful local group, the Callaway Writers, and the folks at this website have given me. I have published two nonfiction books, articles, feature stories, and a few poems. Also won a few contests. Still haven't sold the novels. 2005: Missouri Compromise |
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Synopsis: Adrift
It's 1852. Scottish orphan Lydia seemed destined to be an overworked, unloved 3rd wife of a much older Mormon convert. Traveling with a church group on their way to the new Zion in Salt Lake City, she sees a chance to escape to a different life when their riverboat blows up, killing her husband, and throwing her into the water where she almost drowns and is rescued by handsome Kincaid, Missouri horse whisperer. She convinces him to help her get to her long lost older brother in Texas. Lydia disguises herself as a boy, and they get jobs on a mule freight train on the Santa Fe Trail. Kincaid is falling in love with an "innocent young girl" in distress, but he doesn't know the Mormon elders are in hot pursuit because Lydia stole the whole groups homesteading money...
Then they run into the Indians, and the six gun toting lady rancher, and the frontier hero who burns his own fort down....
Excerpt: Adrift
If she hadn't looked so much like Molly, he might have let her drown.
He would have wanted to save her, of course. Ransom wanted to save all of them - everyone he heard screaming, every one who grabbed at his clothes, even those who brushed by him as inert, lifeless objects trailing blood in the muddy waterof the Missouri River. He wanted to save them all. But it was all he could do to fight his way up out of the cold dark, to gulp a mouthful of air before being pulled under again. It took everything he had. There was no thought for anyone, for anything, except fighting the water, the cold, the floating debris, fighting to survive. Until he saw her. She was clinging to a splintered board and as he watched the wicked current ripped it from her fingers. She was so close he could see the horror in her wide blue eyes as she was pulled under again. Blue eyes so like Molly's.
There was no conscious decision made. Those blue eyes pulled him and he found himself diving back down, down into the dark icey water , reaching, stretching his arm out and down until he touched a bit of her heavy skirts, billowing up around her head as she went down. He grabbed a fistful of the material and fought his way back to the surface, dragging her with him.
She was limp, a heavy lifeless weight. But when his head broke the surface a good sized timber came rushing by. It was a piece from the landing with a big iron tie-up ring still firmly attached. He grabbed the ring with his left hand and managed to keep her head above water with his right arm circled around her body.
The cold made both hands numb. He couldn’t feel the fingers if his right hand, but he kept them clamped to the ring until he felt the timber brush against the bank. Then, he let go and grabbed an overhanging branch and used it to pull both of them up on the muddy bank. He lay back for a moment, exhausted, with her across him, facedown on his chest. Her face was white and slack. She wasn’t moving. He had to do something – after all that, he couldn’t let her die. Maybe she swallowed water. He sat up, pulled her across his left arm and thumped her on the back with his right hand. Nothing.. He pulled her head back, untied the sodden bonnet and tossed it aside, slapped her face lightly. Breathe girl! Breathe! He slapped her again, harder, and her head jerked back as she started coughing and choking.
By the time the coughing slowed down, she was shaking like a new calf born to early in a snowstorm. Her whole body shuddered and her voice was weak and hoarse.
“What happened?”
The water was still scattered with splintered wood, furniture, clothing, boxes, barrels, and bodies. Ransom looked away, and grasping her shoulders, gently turned her around to face into the woods
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